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Winked At Me

I heard a noise under the sink that sounded like a clink, I think. At first, I thought it was the cat; her collar can make sounds like that. But this sounded more like a bell ringing, as far as I could tell. Now, what could it possibly be, I simply had to go and see. It couldn't be a rat or a mouse, there are none of those in my house. I cracked open the cupboard door for a quick peek, and nothing more. But what I saw was not scary, it was a trapped, frightened fairy. She looked up, smiled, and winked at me; for I was there to set her free. Prettier than a butterfly, her wings were as blue as the sky. How she got trapped, I'll never know; but I'm happy I let her go.

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Date: 4/10/2023 11:05:00 AM
What a delightful song to capture the imaginations of children - of all ages Emile! A wonderful story! Is there an epilogue? Would be fun to know what happens to you and your blue fairy! Congratulations on your win and foray into fantasy! Happy Easter Season!
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Date: 4/10/2023 12:31:00 PM
Thanks, Sam, I'll think about that epilogue...and as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/9/2023 2:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Nursery Rhyme contest, Emile :) - hugs
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Date: 4/9/2023 8:09:00 AM
Thanks, Sunshine, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/8/2023 11:05:00 AM
This is precious Emile. I'm happy you let her go as well :) Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/9/2023 8:09:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/7/2023 9:05:00 PM
I love this a lot. This is such a delightful and beautiful nursery rhyme poem/song for children my dear poet friend. I'm pretty sure children will enjoy this immensely. Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you and your loved ones this Holy Week and always.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/8/2023 7:32:00 AM
Thanks, Len, I welcome and appreciate your comments, have a great day my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/7/2023 5:46:00 PM
What a sweet nursery rhyme, Emile. Congratulations on your win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/8/2023 7:31:00 AM
Thanks, Ann, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/7/2023 4:49:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win on your poem, “Winked At Me" . Many blessings to you. Hugs Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/8/2023 7:30:00 AM
Thanks, Eve, I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/27/2023 1:18:00 PM
- Lovely and sweet poem, Emile :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/28/2023 6:55:00 AM
Thanks, Sunshine, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
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