Wings Whispering Blissfulness

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Flying dove-like in the midst of a sea of blueness Bringing a warm sensory of quiet and peacefulness A delicate quill floats and moves with the mild breeze Each butterfly represents a profound gift of gentle ease. Whispering Wings, indigenous force's benefactress Tugging the chords despite purveying mercifulness Meandering in the pristine wilderness same as wildebeest It suspires into our buoyant spirits, looks, and sparest. Gravitational radiation, mindfulness adjustments Scarcely an effectiveness shrinkage upright abutments Will achieve divine reality in everlasting eternity Heart at God glimpses from the chasm of leniency. Balmy justness heaves, and the spirit reawakens The scarcity of crispness was withdrawn slice at once Ecstasy has glowed, and the epitome run sway Emptiness is hidden when the shapes shrink away.
Written: January 12, 2022 for the 'Whispering Wings' Poetry Contest or Chantelle Anne Cooke.

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Date: 1/15/2022 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Wings Whispering Blissfulness" is a wonderful write/picture. Have a blessed day/weekend........................
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Date: 1/14/2022 5:34:00 PM
The lovely peaceful sensibility of your words shine bright in this lovely winning poem Lasaad. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/14/2022 4:03:00 PM
Nothing re awakens the spirit better then the flutter of whispering wings, your are soothing my senses here dear Lasaad, Congratulations on your well written poem, :)
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Date: 1/13/2022 10:23:00 AM
I can understand the lure & magic of butterflies. They barely live 2 months, maybe the Monarch a bit longer. They migrate from Canada to Mexico, in 6 months with 3 generations. But how do they know where & why ( + no visas). Salam
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Date: 1/13/2022 8:44:00 AM
from this descriptive piece, I can see you think of the butterflies in the same way as I do!
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Date: 1/13/2022 4:17:00 AM
- A beautiful and sensitive poem, Las - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/13/2022 12:55:00 AM
God created the most beautiful things in this world. Man uses destructive spray that could prove a disaster.
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Date: 1/12/2022 10:00:00 PM
Under the vast sea of the blue sky, the butterfly on whispering wings gives a sensory quiet and peacefulness. and our spirits are reawakened to see God's great craftsmanship. A lovely poem Lasaad and all the Best in the contest!
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