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Wings Whispering Blissfulness

Flying dove-like in the midst of a sea of blueness
Bringing a warm sensory of quiet and peacefulness
A delicate quill floats and moves with the mild breeze
Each butterfly represents a profound gift of gentle ease.

Whispering Wings, indigenous force's benefactress
Tugging the chords despite purveying mercifulness
Meandering in the pristine wilderness same as wildebeest
It suspires into our buoyant spirits, looks, and sparest.

Gravitational radiation, mindfulness adjustments
Scarcely an effectiveness shrinkage upright abutments
Will achieve divine reality in everlasting eternity
Heart at God glimpses from the chasm of leniency.

Balmy justness heaves, and the spirit reawakens
The scarcity of crispness was withdrawn slice at once
Ecstasy has glowed, and the epitome run sway
Emptiness is hidden when the shapes shrink away.



Written: January 12, 2022

for the 'Whispering Wings' Poetry Contest or Chantelle Anne Cooke.

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Paula Goldsmith January 15, 2022 at 8:33 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Wings Whispering Blissfulness" is a wonderful write/picture. Have a blessed day/weekend........................

Connie Marcum Wong January 14, 2022 at 5:34 PM The lovely peaceful sensibility of your words shine bright in this lovely winning poem Lasaad. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo

Mystic Rose Rose January 14, 2022 at 4:03 PM Nothing re awakens the spirit better then the flutter of whispering wings, your are soothing my senses here dear Lasaad, Congratulations on your well written poem, :)

Anil Deo January 13, 2022 at 10:23 AM I can understand the lure & magic of butterflies. They barely live 2 months, maybe the Monarch a bit longer. They migrate from Canada to Mexico, in 6 months with 3 generations. But how do they know where & why ( + no visas). Salam

Andrea Dietrich January 13, 2022 at 8:44 AM from this descriptive piece, I can see you think of the butterflies in the same way as I do!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2022 at 4:17 AM - A beautiful and sensitive poem, Las - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar January 13, 2022 at 12:55 AM God created the most beautiful things in this world. Man uses destructive spray that could prove a disaster.

Valsa George January 12, 2022 at 10:00 PM Under the vast sea of the blue sky, the butterfly on whispering wings gives a sensory quiet and peacefulness. and our spirits are reawakened to see God's great craftsmanship. A lovely poem Lasaad and all the Best in the contest!