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- Wings of Beauty -

                                      a bird is perched high
                                grateful for the moment spent
                                         carefree melodies
                                  feeling brave and energized
                                  embrace the peaceful aura

    
                                             01.05.2023
                                    Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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McBride  Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 11:51 AM
This is a beautiful peaceful scene and poem to express this, love it Hugs : )
Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 11:58 AM
- Thank you so much, Stephan :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 12:40 PM
So charming!! and when did you lose your sunshine name?
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 1:32 PM
:))) ... I got sunburned, Andrea :)
Buhagiar Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Brilliant picture and love bite-size poem. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 5:59 AM
- Thank you so much Victor, for the lovely comment :) - hugs
Baker Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 4:51 PM
Nice Tanka, Anne-Lise. An enjoyable read. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 5:05 PM
- Thank you so much, Bill my friend in Texas, for the lovely comment :) - hugs
Sands Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 7:54 AM
This is so nice to see today! Thanks for sharing. A beautiful Tanka. A Fave for me . Hugs :)
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 12:17 PM
- Sad that the birds don't sing where you live, Heidi :( - Many thanks for the fave and comment :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 4:18 AM
Very descriptive work you have penned in this one. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Lovely species in the picture. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 12:16 PM
- Lovely to wake up to birdsong outside the window ... thank you so much, Sara :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 1:11 AM
Loved the carefree melodies.
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 12:13 PM
- Thank you so much Victor, for the lovely comment :) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 6:32 PM
Anne-Lise, beautiful and tranquil!
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 12:12 PM
- Thank you so much for the lovely comment, Tania :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 4:17 PM
No wonder there are so many bird watchers. They are such a joy to hear and to behold. Your poem captured the beauty of such peaceful moments perfectly, Anne-Lise. :)
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 12:12 PM
- I am not a specialist in birds ... I think they are all beautiful and sing beautiful melodies ... thank you very much, Evelyn :) - hugs
Faulkner Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 4:04 PM
The bluebirds are starting to return to my neighborhood and they do bring the gentle feeling of spring, like your lovely tanka~
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 12:10 PM
- A happy sound that means spring is coming... thanks for the lovely comment, Michelle :) - hugs
Kauffman Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 2:56 PM
So beautiful Anne-Lise! Really remarkable tanka that captures that fleeting moment in dawn! I know it is spring when the birds return! Thank you for this blissful moment to rapturous song! Hugs and blessings!
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 12:08 PM
- Always beautiful to listen to birdsong, Sam :) - Thank you so much for the lovely comment :) - hugs
Rolland Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 2:22 PM
birds have so much energy to share, i love them in the early morning waking me up, beautiful penning
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 12:07 PM
- Bird song makes us happy... many thanks for your comment, Yann :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 11:42 AM
May marks the start of Spring, although I believe we will be delayed this year because it is still cold, but we shall hear the birds very soon. I enjoyed reading your poem, Anne.
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 12:38 PM
- The birds and I are both waiting for spring temperatures ... thank you very much, Las :) - hugs
Turner Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 11:29 AM
Sweet! Anne:) I like listening!
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 11:35 AM
- me too :) - Thanks, Daniel :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 9:51 AM
Spring has arrived here now and it's lovely to hear the birds again. Hope it soon comes to you Anne. Tom
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 10:58 AM
- May is the month of spring, Tom ... it's only been two days since it snowed ... right now: + 5 degrees and cold wind ... but, the birds have arrived and they are singing :) - hugs
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