Constance La France Poet Ballad

Wings of a Dove

 
lovely, is love
wings of a dove

kisses feathery as snowflakes
like heavenly sent sweet magic
lost in an ocean pelagic
ethereal until daybreaks

like heavenly sent sweet magic
but, there are days when the heart aches
and there are days when my world shakes
lost in an ocean pelagic

lovely, is love
like heavenly sent sweet magic
love gives and never ever takes
lost in an ocean pelagic
wings of a dove . . . 

wings of a dove
lovely, is love

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November 19, 2021


Poetry/Ballad/wings of a dove
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1408-382-19
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France


Written for the Premier contest, Meditative Ballad
sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 01/22/2022

Second Place

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Connie Marcum Wong February 4, 2022 at 9:46 PM Wow Constance. This is a divine entry. I see why it won second place. Congratulations my friend! Blessings xxoo Constance La France February 5, 2022 at 7:35 AM Connie, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance

Malabika Ray Choudhury February 2, 2022 at 11:56 AM Congratulations on your awesome win, Constance! Your poem is beautiful, and perfect example of the form. Love and blessings ~ Mala Constance La France February 2, 2022 at 3:21 PM Mala, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment, blessing ~ Constance

Joanna Daniel February 2, 2022 at 5:09 AM Soothing and relatable, Constance, congratulations:) Constance La France February 2, 2022 at 7:44 AM Jo, thank you so much for the comment and congratultions ~Constance

Terry Miller February 1, 2022 at 1:48 AM Beautiful poem congratulations on your win. Constance La France February 1, 2022 at 5:05 AM Terry, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance

Christuraj Alex January 31, 2022 at 8:12 PM Beautiful description. Congratulations! By the way, thank you for the opportunities given through your contests for me to keep on writing. Thank you very much. Constance La France February 1, 2022 at 5:06 AM Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and the congratulations, and for the compliment on my contest, so happy they inspire ~Constance

Reason A. Poteet January 31, 2022 at 6:07 PM So different, Constance, and yet as beautiful a composition as ever from your prolific pen. A perfect example for the meditative ballad, romantic, nostalgic, reflective all rolled into one. Constance La France February 1, 2022 at 5:07 AM Reason, thank you so much for the compliment, and comment ~Constance

Emile Pinet January 31, 2022 at 10:19 AM Congratulations Constance! Your poem has placed "Second" in my contest. This contest was difficult, calling for exacting syllable counts and perfect rhymes as requirements of this form, and yet your poem stood out. Well done my friend, Emile. Constance La France January 31, 2022 at 3:41 PM Emile, thanks for the inspiration, the contest, the nice comment and compliment and the congratulations ~Constance

Valsa George November 26, 2021 at 10:52 PM Lovely is love and lovely is your poem, Constance ! Love and Regards Constance La France November 27, 2021 at 2:23 PM Valsa, thank you for the visit and the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Beryl Edmonds November 21, 2021 at 3:19 PM A lovely ballad Constance, sweet magic… Belle Constance La France November 22, 2021 at 5:56 AM Belle, thanks so much for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Darlene De Beaulieu November 19, 2021 at 12:11 PM Hello Constance, I love the Dove. My fav. bird. I enjoy their song. Peace & Love. Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu November 24, 2021 at 12:10 PM Hello Constance, Doves are beautiful birds. I like their song. Love, & Serenity Darlene Constance La France November 20, 2021 at 12:00 PM Darlene, thanks for the visit, I love doves too ~ love and serenity _Constance

Unseeking Seeker November 19, 2021 at 8:33 AM Another level! Constance La France November 20, 2021 at 12:01 PM Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Vijay Pandit November 19, 2021 at 7:49 AM Beautiful and serene. Enjoyed the voice of your poem, Constance. Meditative tenor and flow. Constance La France November 20, 2021 at 12:02 PM Vijay, thank you so much for the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance