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wings of a dove

lovely, is love wings of a dove kisses feathery as snowflakes like heavenly sent sweet magic lost in an ocean pelagic ethereal until daybreaks like heavenly sent sweet magic but, there are days when the heart aches and there are days when my world shakes lost in an ocean pelagic lovely, is love like heavenly sent sweet magic love gives and never ever takes lost in an ocean pelagic wings of a dove . . . wings of a dove lovely, is love _____________________ November 19, 2021 Poetry/Ballad/wings of a dove Copyright Protected, ID 10-1408-382-19 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Meditative Ballad sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 01/22/2022 Second Place

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Date: 2/4/2022 9:46:00 PM
Wow Constance. This is a divine entry. I see why it won second place. Congratulations my friend! Blessings xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 2/5/2022 7:35:00 AM
Connie, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 2/2/2022 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Constance! Your poem is beautiful, and perfect example of the form. Love and blessings ~ Mala
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Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2022 3:21:00 PM
Mala, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment, blessing ~ Constance
Date: 2/2/2022 5:09:00 AM
Soothing and relatable, Constance, congratulations:)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2022 7:44:00 AM
Jo, thank you so much for the comment and congratultions ~Constance
Date: 2/1/2022 1:48:00 AM
Beautiful poem congratulations on your win.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/1/2022 5:05:00 AM
Terry, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance
Date: 1/31/2022 8:12:00 PM
Beautiful description. Congratulations! By the way, thank you for the opportunities given through your contests for me to keep on writing. Thank you very much.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/1/2022 5:06:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and the congratulations, and for the compliment on my contest, so happy they inspire ~Constance
Date: 1/31/2022 6:07:00 PM
So different, Constance, and yet as beautiful a composition as ever from your prolific pen. A perfect example for the meditative ballad, romantic, nostalgic, reflective all rolled into one.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/1/2022 5:07:00 AM
Reason, thank you so much for the compliment, and comment ~Constance
Date: 1/31/2022 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations Constance! Your poem has placed "Second" in my contest. This contest was difficult, calling for exacting syllable counts and perfect rhymes as requirements of this form, and yet your poem stood out. Well done my friend, Emile.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2022 3:41:00 PM
Emile, thanks for the inspiration, the contest, the nice comment and compliment and the congratulations ~Constance
Date: 11/26/2021 10:52:00 PM
Lovely is love and lovely is your poem, Constance ! Love and Regards
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Constance La France
Date: 11/27/2021 2:23:00 PM
Valsa, thank you for the visit and the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/21/2021 3:19:00 PM
A lovely ballad Constance, sweet magic… Belle
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Constance La France
Date: 11/22/2021 5:56:00 AM
Belle, thanks so much for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/19/2021 12:11:00 PM
Hello Constance, I love the Dove. My fav. bird. I enjoy their song. Peace & Love. Darlene
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Date: 11/24/2021 12:10:00 PM
Hello Constance, Doves are beautiful birds. I like their song. Love, & Serenity Darlene
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Constance La France
Date: 11/20/2021 12:00:00 PM
Darlene, thanks for the visit, I love doves too ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/19/2021 8:33:00 AM
Another level!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/20/2021 12:01:00 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 11/19/2021 7:49:00 AM
Beautiful and serene. Enjoyed the voice of your poem, Constance. Meditative tenor and flow.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/20/2021 12:02:00 PM
Vijay, thank you so much for the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance