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Wings Across the Cosmos

Hurtling through the universe wings across the cosmos Maneuvering midst galaxies his body a joystick Experiencing a heady freedom like no man before him ... What did he lack ~ Why return to a broken home

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/10/2024 6:19:00 PM

An interesting poem. Perhaps a life in space is a future possibility.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2024 6:52:00 PM

My head is already spaced-out; I might as well take my body along with it. lol.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/10/2024 4:25:00 AM

wow, Gershon! I found your poem artistically created with a powerful last line. Well done, sir! Have a splendid day!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2024 6:48:00 PM

Thanks for the enthusiasm on this one, Sara. :) - Gershon

Mat Ignacio

Date: 2/9/2024 8:19:00 PM

i like this wolf - in its brevity you have artistically painted a picture of intrigue

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2024 6:54:00 PM

Appreciate your encouraging words, Mat. Thanks, gw