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Wings

Wings Summer has come early this year a Pieridae the shade of candle wax suspending its journey, rests against her open bathroom window. Draughts from the west wind replaces air from Northern chills, a comfort in the heated water. Squeezing her eyes half closed body is veiled in a haze of steam; sealed as though there’s no escape, ‘til curtains flutter as butterfly wings. like her thoughts, ready for flight.

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Date: 7/4/2020 9:13:00 AM
‘til curtains flutter as butterfly wings. like her thoughts, ready for flight... Great ending...
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Jeanne Macdonald
Date: 7/4/2020 10:49:00 AM
Thank you

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