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Wings

Wings


Summer has come early this year
a Pieridae the shade of candle wax

suspending its journey, rests
against her open bathroom window. 

Draughts from the west wind
replaces air from Northern chills,

a comfort in the heated water.
Squeezing her eyes half closed
 
body is veiled in a haze of steam;
sealed as though there’s no escape,
 
‘til curtains flutter as butterfly wings.
like her thoughts, ready for flight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 7/4/2020 9:13:00 AM
‘til curtains flutter as butterfly wings. like her thoughts, ready for flight... Great ending...
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Jeanne Macdonald
Date: 7/4/2020 10:49:00 AM
Thank you

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