wingless love

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Poetic Form: Suzette Prime

Inspired: 2023 November 12

Image: Symphony of Love by blogspot.com

wither
away not
to thee gifts reason

of art
wingless dove bestilled
on halfpace empyreal thy breast behooves
thee further

o'er yond clingiest fairgrounds
moor dawning flora
promising showboat sanctifying lightness
up from their beds and
to their feds and down
to their peds

all the same maternally presence clement
intimate cavernous fire claimants contest

a fleeting gesture
of unattainable love

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Sotto Poet

Date: 11/12/2023 6:15:00 PM

Dear William, this poem exemplifies your limitless creativity. Whatever subject you choose to pen, your abilities will always shine through. I was blown away by both the poem and the content of your work. BOL with the contest.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/12/2023 6:40:00 PM

Thanks aplenty, my friend. I was feeling my way through Suze's form, being my first at bat with it, so I decided to enter 'Abeyance' as it was the first pix I viewed and just went with that one she had entitled 'Vermiso'. BOL to you too, Lasaad...if you entered. Aloha, William