Winged Steeds of Mist

Winged Steeds of Mist

Out in the vales of freedom,
of rippled hills and plunging canyons,
there is nought but wind 
to carve through the wild horse

Light mane, nostrils flared,
veins like sacred rivers;
heart with a hawk spirit
flight strikes music from
bright pinioned hooves

Coats of shimmering autumn,
pied shadows, blinding snow
Time and mist have scribbled fear
into the sinews

Winged at the first breaking
sounds of intrusion
fear of capture awakens a scream
far older than the sound it emits
escape,escape
pound,strive, wild horse
snort fire and acquire
the secret of flying
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Mythical ~ beautifully crafted poem
Fenn Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 7:06 PM
Wow! I like this horse poem! Everyone wants to be free like these wild horses.
Horsman Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 10:55 PM
I too, had to come and enjoy this wonderful gem of poetry,
Callus Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 11:36 AM
It's been a while since I last read this poem, Suzanne. It has lost none of its poetic allure! ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 6:12 AM
Exceptional imagery. You did this so well. :0)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:00 PM
I really love the spirit of the wild horse you share in this depiction of their beauty SuZ....A fave for me! : )
Callus Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 8:34 AM
Vivid, beautiful and full of movement, Suz. The sight of wild horses is very inspiring, and I too have often used these lovely animals metaphorically in my poems. Regards & hugs // paul
Delaney Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 2:50 PM
Thanks for your kind comment and for stopping to visit. I haven't had much time for writing or posting this year. We finished our renovation and went on the Queen Marty 2 to Southampton, then flew to Potugal. I see two contewst themes I can write to...World Cruise and Foriegn Place.. Must get busy lol Hugs, SuZ O... for some inspiration.
Lawless Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 8:09 AM
You had me at the title, hooked me with the first line and had me galloping to read more. Beautifully vivid scenes racing across the prairies.
Lane Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 7:53 AM
It's a beautiful sight to see wild horses flying across those rippled hills. I really like the verse in which you poetically describe their coloring. Well done, Suzanne.
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