Wing of a Hawk

The signal to leave is called out urgently.
Blue jays spin, whistle, and gurgle.
Heralds of the gray days of winter.

We climb Hawk Ridge Observatory hill.
The rough benches, wooden table, a simple tabernacle.
It’s a late summer day,
tinged with the soft reds of Fall.
The lake swells, delicate white froth
hushes and bubbles caressing the shore.

Our guide lifts something curious
out of a dusty old box.
In her arms is a single great wing.
With gentle gesture she invites us in.
Birdsong relaying migration routes
form a choir as we silently approach.

This was a killing wing.
Ruthless in its resolute trajectory of the dive,
grasp of bloodied vole to nourish
his brood, squawking from their cliff-edge nest.
Each feather feels strong, indestructible,
yet, this hawk was found with wings outstretched,
a span of six feet end-to-end,
neck broken on the golden sand.

I stroke the black and grey feathers.
Thin-ribbed architecture smooth, cool,
the skeletal structure rustling, lifting,
lifting as if it might suddenly take off.

The corpse-wing caught the next gust of wind
carrying the hawk-spirit on thermal spirals.
High in the pale of blue sky a hawk wheels and cries,
casting a shadow onto the very spot her mate died.

Mourned by his love. Majestic in death.
I learned about life, that day at Hawk Ridge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 1/15/2024 9:50:00 AM
The poem beautifully conveys a deep connection to nature and the profound lessons that can be learned from observing the cycles of life and death. The vivid descriptions and emotional resonance make this a compelling and thought-provoking piece.
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Laraine Kentridge Lasdon
Date: 1/15/2024 9:58:00 AM
Thank you so much. This poem and others are in a Collection called A Pineapple and an Old Yellow Curtain on Amazon (you don't need to buy it :) Just sharing. It's a true story and experience.
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