Lin Lane Poet Free verse

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                            October 17, 2023

Windswept

A gentle breeze is blowing through the trees,
whistling a lively tune in an aspen grove.
Rustling golden leaves as if they were dancing
to Autumn's song before they tumble and fall.
Windswept to the ground, an amber carpet
found when nature wants to change her gown.

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Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2023 at 8:05 AM Beautiful imagery. :0) Lin Lane October 19, 2023 at 8:25 AM Thanks very much. ;-)

Daisy Meadows October 18, 2023 at 12:39 AM A lovely Autumn poem. Well written. Lin Lane October 18, 2023 at 3:08 AM Thanks so much, Jeanette.

Jeff Connelly October 17, 2023 at 5:42 PM A sense of the serene in this one Lin. Very nice image conveyed. Thanks Lin Lane October 17, 2023 at 5:54 PM With grateful acknowledgement.

Terry Flood October 17, 2023 at 3:28 PM A lovely Autumnal write, Lin. I’ve just discovered that our enormous cherry tree is a harlot and an exhibitionist… it’s been very windy here today, and yet that cherry tree simply threw her gown to the ground… No slow striptease for her… best get my broom, I guess Lin Lane October 17, 2023 at 3:56 PM awww, let her enjoy her swan song, Terry. Maybe she shed her gown so you would notice. Harlot!! really. Don't ever lose your wit.

Abdullah Alhemaidy October 17, 2023 at 3:01 PM Very nice descriptive poem about fall season! Enjoyed read, have a nice season ~AA Lin Lane October 17, 2023 at 3:04 PM Thank you very much for your kind words, AA. I appreciate you for reading and leaving your thoughts.