Windswept

i'm not sure what's stirring more this wind wresting leaves or my mind wallowing in thoughts of you i find myself entranced within this amber sway adrift like leaves dancing through dreams wondering if i were to fall would you pick me up caress me hold me tight or leave me tumble bloodied ashamed to crumble grounded unnamed

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John Watt

Date: 3/28/2020 11:38:00 AM

Gorgeous tapestry of leaves in the wind and wistful pondering of love's vulnerability. The last word, "unnamed" is such a powerfully lonely word, well chosen. Congratulations on your wind, dear Sandra (pun intended, sorry...) Hugs ~ John

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/16/2019 5:51:00 PM

Your beauty started long ago, keep it up dear Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 5:57:00 PM

Thank you so very much Pixie :) hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/15/2019 10:02:00 PM

Lovely, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 5:56:00 PM

thank you so much Line :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/11/2019 4:33:00 PM

Hi Sandra, Love your breezy poem, a sensuous touch throughout your write which leaves the reader breathless, beautiful imagery! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/11/2019 5:11:00 PM

wow thank you Jennifer, it was a quick inspiration, really little thought, my muse kind of ran with it, sometimes i guess that's makes for better poems... :) hugs

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/11/2019 3:59:00 PM

I was swept up in the melancholy musings and breezy beauty of your poetic artistry, Sandra. Dreamy yet tenderly moving poetry. Love the title too. Warmest wishes always, dear poetess.. ~ Susan

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/11/2019 5:10:00 PM

Thank you so much Susan...just a windy autumn day that inspired a few quick pennings today.... hugs :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/11/2019 3:13:00 PM

The answer, my friend is blowing in the wind... :) gw

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/11/2019 5:09:00 PM

lol thank you my friend... see not all my poems are harsh :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/11/2019 2:59:00 PM

Simply beautiful poetry, Sandy..soft and tender..

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/11/2019 5:08:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay...just being inspired a bit by this windy autumn day... hugs :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/11/2019 2:14:00 PM

This is beautiful and reminds me of my windy walk today here, too! Well written Sandra :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/11/2019 2:20:00 PM

You are stuck in this windy autumn bliss with the rest of us it seems. A little chilly here with the wind but not rainy so that’s a plus. Thank you Heidi :) hugs

Hello There

Date: 10/11/2019 1:40:00 PM

"windswept" is the perfect title for this piece as it mimics perfectly the weather outdoors today and thoughts whirling within. You will be picked up, my friend...

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/11/2019 2:16:00 PM

Thank you my friend it seems we are all in this wind tunnel today. Hopefully it doesn’t hang around too long .. hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/11/2019 1:35:00 PM

- They are beautiful when they dance in the wind, Sandra - It's their last dance ... Even if I hold "you" tight, "you" would die in my arms ... but I would always remember your name :"The Pearl of Autumn" - A very sensitive poem ... wonderfully written, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/11/2019 2:18:00 PM

Thank you my friend for your beautiful comment. They are pretty when they dance in the wind. Hair not so much ... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 10/11/2019 12:10:00 PM

Wow, not only was this deeply touching and amazingly beautiful but so appropriate for my area today. I just arrived back at my office and the first thing I said to a work mate was, battling that wind out there is rough. Your poem really touches on questions that may seem so simple but the desire to know the answers flows like a strong breeze on a blustery autumn day. This was amazing my friend. I believe their answer would be they would definitely catch you if you fall.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/11/2019 12:37:00 PM

Thank you my friend... it is very windy here today. I was watching the wind lift the leaves off the ground and scatter them again. Always windy around these parts because of all our hills I believe ... hugs :)