Winds, Trees, Me and You

A senryu for A Shero, heroes, and for POETRY's sake ---

I
sudden gusts of Fall -
green heroes fall in twos, threes
yes, trees, and you, me

II
Notice the saplings sway
With the winds ways, unbroken
Resist and old limbs fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 7:54 AM
Oh I like this. Lovely done. xomo
Bangalee Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 1:15 AM
wow......superb
Deo Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 1:41 AM
thanX much Mahtabjee. App kayseh ho?
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