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Winds of Night

                         Oh, winds of night
                  that softly sighs and soothes 
           my skin. Stay with me, why don't you?
             Cool and swoosh away disquietudes
             that might perturb my restful sleep.
         Do away with anxious thoughts gradually
          piling up in a heap, forming a mountain
           in my mind. You see, it's much too big 
                        to hold in all at once.
                         Drive them all out...
                         out of the window
           Let all my worries of the day drift away 
        with you. Do dissolve these white elephants
         in the midnight sky, or scatter them at sea.
              They're no longer useful to me now.
          Blow all my worn-out concerns of the day
               far, far away, so I can count sheep
        and rise with the sun with immaculate mind.
       Steal away everything, but my lovely dream.



Date written: 11/23/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Empress Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 12:21 AM
This is soul stirring and so beautiful and evocative. So happy to see this placed in brians contest. Congratulations
Ibeh Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 4:57 PM
Thank you very much, Inky:-)
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 3:14 PM
A pleasure to find your lovely poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Edward~
Ibeh Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 4:41 PM
Thank you for visiting this poem of mine, Line:-)
Roper Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 7:41 PM
This is a wonderful well written poem, Edward , congratulations on your 1st place win.
Ibeh Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 9:30 PM
Thank you very much, Eve!:-)
Makama Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Beautiful... So beautiful! Keep it up souper.
Ibeh Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 4:48 PM
Thank you so much, Funom!:-) Most obliged.
Green Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 10:28 AM
This was absolutely beautiful Edward. I really enjoyed this.
Ibeh Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Thank you so much, Chris!:-)
Pandit Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 8:51 AM
WOW! This is excellent in every way. So much gleams from these words..deep and meaningful.
Ibeh Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay!:-) So glad you liked my poem...
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