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neath darkening sky swept away, flowers take wing in winds brisk surfing rustling leaves, swaying branches weaving springtime morns glances 2/19/2022 A Brian Strand Tanka Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand a tanka in English is a 3 line hiku & a 2 line couplet

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Date: 2/23/2022 5:05:00 AM
Hi. Eve! xox. Here you pen so many more than we poets love and commit to memory in spring. This needs no Good -Luck wish added for the contest. This poem stands high in its complete excellence of word choice, phrasing, rhyme, and flow. Bravo! sally
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Date: 2/22/2022 4:05:00 AM
Splendid imagery...I hear you, loving spring best of all. Guessing, the other seasons just to keep us appreciative. I know, skiing is cool too. Not too found of raking leaves when the novelty of color has worn off...and summer in Phoenix, you want to be somewhere else.
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Date: 2/20/2022 10:06:00 AM
Eve, All favorite things in a lush poem. Thankyou Tanka! -Richard
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Date: 2/19/2022 3:49:00 PM
Gorgeous one. Big congrats
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Date: 2/19/2022 2:07:00 PM
Fantastic tanka! One of the bests I have read. A fav for me. CONGRATULATIONS.
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Date: 2/19/2022 8:41:00 AM
Love to see the blossom in spring time with the wind creating a scene like snow flakes. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 2/19/2022 7:46:00 AM
Sweet tanka Eve!
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