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Windows To the Soul

Windows to the soul


The eyes are windows to the soul, I'll open mine, will you open yours?




John Derek Hamilton
August 27,2020

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 10/8/2022 7:03:00 PM

A warm + intriguing Monoku. Sight is much more that simply opened eyes; it requires a welcoming acceptance shared by two. Very well penned, John. All the best, Brian

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/30/2020 4:25:00 PM

The intimacy of looking deeply into another's eyes, the personal exposure of letting someone look deeply into our own eyes takes a willingness, a commitment in communication on a soulful level that reveals so much more than mere words ever can. What a beautiful, tender and meaningful monoku, John. So thought-provoking. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

John Hamilton
Date: 10/30/2020 7:26:00 PM

Thanks Susan you really have a remarkable way of intuitively understanding the deeper part of the message, this one seems simple but you got to the heart of the matter (Don Henley reference) thanks so much for your generous words!

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 9/23/2020 12:57:00 PM

I wonder sometimes if the soul sees through the eyes of its human, or whether it sees through its heart and the heart is the true window. Do we / do souls, metaphorically see through the eyes, or the heart?

John Hamilton
Date: 9/24/2020 9:49:00 AM

Thanks Leanne. Since we are souls the eyes do see to the innermost self, who we are deep inside, and if we look deep enough in others eyes we can see who they are deep inside. That's why so many cannot maintain eye contact, they know if they do then they will be exposed, especially if they have evil intentions.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2020 3:50:00 PM

this is one of the most romantic monoku I've ever seen. Love the ones on eyes!!

John Hamilton
Date: 9/1/2020 7:22:00 PM

Thanks Andrea check soupmail!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/31/2020 4:00:00 PM

beautiful plea for mutual understanding, john... honored to be placed in your last challenge.. thanks and huggs

John Hamilton
Date: 8/31/2020 5:49:00 PM

Thanks Nette glad you're around more often now!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/30/2020 7:27:00 PM

Open your eyes, open your heart, open your soul - so must to learn and feel, very evocative, John-

John Hamilton
Date: 8/31/2020 3:27:00 PM

Thanks Michelle

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/30/2020 9:07:00 AM

We all probably spend to much time asleep, so to speak...

John Hamilton
Date: 8/30/2020 9:59:00 AM

So true, thanks Charlie!

Silent One

Date: 8/29/2020 10:20:00 AM

yes i will and they are open... Great one liner...

John Hamilton
Date: 8/29/2020 8:09:00 PM

Thanks SO

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/28/2020 5:25:00 AM

Powerful write John...the answer is always yes... but not easy to do..

John Hamilton
Date: 8/28/2020 9:20:00 AM

Thanks Vijay, I appreciate your kind visit as always!

Jenna Logan

Date: 8/28/2020 3:12:00 AM

I hope so, for it's the only way to have an open mind to so many things. This is a real "eye opening" Monoku, John. Please pardon my pun. ;)

John Hamilton
Date: 8/28/2020 9:20:00 AM

Ha ha thanks Jenna for your kind visit!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/28/2020 2:05:00 AM

- This is the only way you can realize freedom and joy ... to open your eyes, your mind, your inner feelings ... a gem, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Hamilton
Date: 8/28/2020 9:19:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise

Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2020 8:58:00 PM

beautifully penned John wise words indeed:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton
Date: 8/27/2020 9:13:00 PM

Thanks Jan

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/27/2020 8:53:00 PM

Good question. Seems when our eyes are open, the eyes of so many- are not. Wise words my dear friend. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. ~ Brandy

John Hamilton
Date: 8/27/2020 9:13:00 PM

Thanks Brandy

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