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Windows In the Dark

She walks in the night In hopes the chill will ease her heart suspecting not the nip that came when she looked through the windows in the dark A fathers belt high in hand Thinking this will make his rebel son a man She walks in the night... Pretty girl, barley a teen holding the joint to her lips In search of feeling anything than the empty life inflicts She walks in the night... He sits before the monitor a gamers fury colored screen In rage he screams profanities trading reality for make believe She turned around and walked the night her chill turned bitter cold, her only thought to hurry home and her children she longed to hold Are the days of gathered families enjoying a movie and playing cards or sharing an evening meal together found no more through the windows in the dark? Where are the lovers dancing around the living-room fathers and mothers loving knowing life will end too soon? She thinks of all the images we used to dream and the heart we hoped to impart when we ourselves were children on our walks looking through the windows in the dark.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/25/2014 9:31:00 AM
I love the mood you have created even though it hurts to look into dark windows. This is exceptional work.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/26/2014 9:28:00 AM
All is well. Thanks for asking.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 3/25/2014 11:51:00 PM
Thank you Richard, it seems it's been forever since I've read your work, I'll have to do some catching up. Hope all is well with you and yours. Hugs
Date: 3/24/2014 12:59:00 PM
You have a typo in the fifth line from the bottom - it should read knowing instead of kowing. That being said, you have some fine work here. It reminds me of a Laura Nyro song called "Blackpatch". Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Sarai Virden
Date: 3/25/2014 11:49:00 PM
Hi Matthew, thanks so much for letting me know about the typo. I just had to look up the song, and yes I see the connection. Blessings my friend :-)
Date: 3/24/2014 6:26:00 AM
You paint a very vivid picture of today! Loving hugs... always! Jack XOXOX
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Sarai Virden
Date: 3/25/2014 11:46:00 PM
Thank you sweet Jack E. Hope all is well with you, the snow has melted and Spring is in the air ... HUGS
Date: 3/23/2014 8:01:00 PM
such a thoughtful and feeling poem this is. I have been thinking these thoughts lately myself when I see my students bent heads over their cell phones every day . The real life is right in front of them, in their classmates!!!
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Sarai Virden
Date: 3/24/2014 3:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea.

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