Windows In the Dark

She walks in the night
In hopes the chill will ease her heart
suspecting not the nip that came
when she looked through the windows in the dark

A fathers belt
high in hand
Thinking this will make
his rebel son a man

She walks in the night... 

Pretty girl, barley a teen
holding the joint to her lips
In search of feeling anything 
than the empty life inflicts

She walks in the night...

He sits before the monitor
a gamers fury colored screen
In rage he screams profanities
trading reality for make believe

She turned around and walked the night
her chill turned bitter cold,
her only thought to hurry home
and her children she longed to hold

Are the days of gathered families
enjoying a movie and playing cards
or sharing an evening meal together
found no more through the windows in the dark? 

Where are the lovers
dancing around the living-room
fathers and mothers loving
knowing life will end too soon?

She thinks of all the images we used to dream
and the heart we hoped to impart
when we ourselves were children on our walks
looking through the windows in the dark.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 9:31 AM
I love the mood you have created even though it hurts to look into dark windows. This is exceptional work.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 9:28 AM
All is well. Thanks for asking.
Virden Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 11:51 PM
Thank you Richard, it seems it's been forever since I've read your work, I'll have to do some catching up. Hope all is well with you and yours. Hugs
Anish Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 12:59 PM
You have a typo in the fifth line from the bottom - it should read knowing instead of kowing. That being said, you have some fine work here. It reminds me of a Laura Nyro song called "Blackpatch". Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Virden Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 11:49 PM
Hi Matthew, thanks so much for letting me know about the typo. I just had to look up the song, and yes I see the connection. Blessings my friend :-)
Ellison Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 6:26 AM
You paint a very vivid picture of today! Loving hugs... always! Jack XOXOX
Virden Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 11:46 PM
Thank you sweet Jack E. Hope all is well with you, the snow has melted and Spring is in the air ... HUGS
Dietrich Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 8:01 PM
such a thoughtful and feeling poem this is. I have been thinking these thoughts lately myself when I see my students bent heads over their cell phones every day . The real life is right in front of them, in their classmates!!!
Virden Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 3:50 AM
Thank you so much Andrea.
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