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Window to the Soul

Window to the Soul
The eyes of lovers are open doors, unlocked by true love and intimacy.
 Each of us holds ourselves captive in that inner panic room, that shelter we begin building upon our first disappointment and heartbreak. 
 Every hurt and betrayal adds a brick or stone…a log or nail to that tranquil room that protects our fragile, egg shell souls. 
              Their eyes were locked together once. 

 Hers like the glowing amber of whiskey as the light shines through the glass. 
His, the earthy green of a moss covered rock, sheltered under the canopy of majestic trees.
She gave him the intoxicating power of her untarnished soul.
He gifted her with the safe refuge of his woodland hideaway, his eager inner-self. 
Sadly, his gaze began to falter, his head lowered to hide his shame. 
Unable to escape into her lover's abode, she became frightened, her power wasted on common sights. 
   In rare moments of connection she hoped and exhaled. But all too soon his far away stare looked past her.  
       
        Without moving a muscle, he veiled his soul. 
     He tore down her refuge with inattention, neglect...
                        ...only to leave her helpless. 

  “Look at me!”, the scream rips from her glare. 
“See me!”, her brow raises its mime’s voice.
Not able to continue this intimacy alone, for intimacy requires plurality, she looks into a mirror.
 Loneliness demands frequent intoxicated binging. 
 She pours her whiskey gaze into herself and actively forgets. 
Her naked, broken soul curls up without shelter, shivering, exposed. 
            As raw as a body, flayed to muscle and bone.
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Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 5:47 PM
Hers like the glowing amber of whiskey as the light shines through the glass.
One Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 12:14 PM
Hey Crystol.. poem offers a raw and unflinching exploration of the fragility of human connection and the devastating impact of unreciprocated love. Through vivid imagery and poignant metaphor, it captures the essence of intimacy as both a refuge and a source of profound vulnerability. The likening of the eyes of lovers to open doors, unlocked by true love and intimacy, sets the stage for a journey through the depths of human emotion.
Woods Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 1:35 PM
Did I do all that!? Jk...I appreciate your thoughtful interpretation. You're always welcome here Silent One. Xo
Rodgers Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 8:32 AM
Dear Suzette, What a powerful exploration of vulnerability and heartbreak. The "inner panic room" imagery perfectly captures the self-protection we build. The contrasting eye colors - "amber whiskey" vs. "earthy green" - highlight their connection. I loved how the lines about "untarnished soul" and "safe refuge" beautifully depict the initial trust. "Look at me!" is a heartfelt plea, showing the one-sided effort. The ending is raw and impactful. It's a truly moving piece. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Woods Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 1:37 PM
Wow... thank you for that insight and encouraging me! I'm super proud of this piece so I'm glad it has moved someone who understands the exposure of writing. Xoxo
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