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she holds to her eyes two lovely white daisies window dressings that conceal a sullied soul For PD's Photograph #1 -under 10 lines- Contest

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Valerie Staton

Date: 1/27/2019 7:18:00 AM

Very well written!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/22/2016 10:58:00 AM

Your title caught my attention and wondered what it could be about-- my brain is kinda slow today, took me the 2nd read to get the metaphor here and when I got it and just hit me, and I have to say, very witty of you to play on that! What at first could be a literal description, holds a different meaning-- ah, windows of the soul indeed. I really enjoyed this one, sweetie pie eye!

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/20/2016 11:24:00 AM

You never cease to amaze me on how you can give full breath to a simple poem, ANDREA!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/20/2016 6:56:00 AM

Hi Andrea, another excellent write from your golden pen. A fine Tanka on the theme. I don't have to wish you good luck in the contest for i know you are a winner, Congratulations on your win in the contest Andrea. Once again you let the heart sing and a winner is born. An excellent Tanka. This has to be a seven Andrea. Hugs....Mike. XX

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/19/2016 5:50:00 PM

I could have sworn that I had commented on this one but I don't see my name here..Thanks for the visit to my page..This one reads like a winner..Sara

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/19/2016 5:13:00 PM

Liked the poem and the picture you chose to go with it. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Joseph May

Date: 4/19/2016 8:12:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win Andrea

Brian Mcclain

Date: 4/18/2016 9:07:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Congrats on your placement with this creative take on the contest theme. Well done! Cheers, Brian

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 4/18/2016 9:03:00 PM

5 lines that speak a lot, well done Andrea!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/18/2016 12:28:00 PM

Great interpretation of the image Andrea:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/18/2016 12:02:00 PM

Beautiful win with beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/18/2016 11:39:00 AM

Congrats Andrea for the beautiful poem. Anisha D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2016 1:56:00 AM

Andrea, Congratulations on your awesome entry for my PICTURE contest. Thank you for keeping it under 10 lines... Stop by my latest blog "Photo Questions" and enjoy my take on the same picture of "Lilly Covering Her eyes." I wrote a little something myself. Enjoy if you like. Always ~LINDA~

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/18/2016 12:42:00 AM

Nice creation. I enjoyed.~7~..................With love.

Thomas Martin

Date: 4/17/2016 5:13:00 PM

Excellent tanka!! Enjoyed the slice of life!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/17/2016 1:14:00 PM

Your words so match the picture. Nicely done. love phyl

Daver Austin

Date: 4/17/2016 11:00:00 AM

The blackness of that photograph is right on. Ooooohhhhwwww, this is such a super Tanka! This can go anywhere in the imagination. Love, daver

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/17/2016 3:09:00 AM

Oh, I love your take on the photo Andrea. GL in the contest, but you really don't need it. ; )

Catherine Labeau

Date: 4/16/2016 9:57:00 PM

you said it all with two daisies. lovely

Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 4/16/2016 8:33:00 PM

Your interpretation is interesting as well, as I expected no less, the eyes being the windows to the soul and all. Wonderful expression.

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/16/2016 1:36:00 PM

Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/16/2016 10:53:00 AM

I saw the picture, so no worries, I did not read your entry to my contest... WINK! WINK! I'm here to tell you, thank you for twisting my arm yesterday... You asked for a new poem, so I decided to post a new poem..LOL.. Enjoy my new poem... By the way... WOW!!! Really WOW, love the last line... Love LINDA

Constance La France

Date: 4/16/2016 9:41:00 AM

Andrea, wonderful, I love this, for some reason I am having a hard time coming up with something for this contest, will have to really meditate one this one ... 7

Joseph May

Date: 4/16/2016 6:45:00 AM

Very nicely penned Andrea...best wishes

Jill Spagnola

Date: 4/16/2016 2:37:00 AM

Awesomely penned! Thank you for the new word! This piece is short and deep "sullied soul" is quite a powerful image..best of luck (to all the other contestants!) lol....peace, I have a new fav :), jill