Window

Outside my window the leaves of Autumn change color
and wait for Winter, as they inch closer to death

Inside my window, I see my reflection in the window's pane
I too wait for Winter
where my skin has wrinkled and grayed
as I inch closer to death

Like the leaves, I see outside my window
I will hang on until the last
and wait for Winter's cold rains to fall
to cleanse the Earth and bring along streams
that roll down my window like tears

My hands tremble 
as the chilly winds blow away the dying leaves
where they tumble into darkness
when the sun rises, my hands are still
and like the leaves, I too have gone

My window like the trees is naked and bare
Winter has come
and the world outside and inside my window
is dark and cold

4/22/23
contest Writing Challenge "W" words
sponsor Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 4/27/2023 12:02:00 PM
Frederic, thank you for sharing your excellent poem with us in my Writing Challenge and I love the music, congratulations !
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Date: 4/27/2023 7:41:00 AM
Hi Frederic, I echo what Sara said. Well done, done. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/27/2023 6:43:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Frederic ... a gloomy view in a winter window :) - hugs
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Date: 4/27/2023 3:55:00 AM
A very revealing work written metaphors found here on the winner's list. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on this winner. Way to go. I too am in the winter of my life but I don't know how long like this year winter will last. Sara
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Date: 4/26/2023 8:37:00 PM
"the world outside and inside my window is dark and cold" - Great imagery. Congratulations!
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