Windgate Nick

(An Addingham poem)

The venerable mist
hangs buoyant; taut,
a stubble veil upon
its face, when currents
of blooming heather lay
along its ancient purple race.
Beneath I stand in retrospect
motionless as time begins to blend,
here where one should feel privileged
to negotiate the freezing wind,
this place surely in need of a friend
where tussock stand rigid still!
My footprint etched upon its soul
before each blade of grass
appears to acknowledge,
this confined partisan role.

© Harry J Horsman  1997
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gauthier Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 11:37 AM
Congrats on your top win, Harry. Well done.
Sirak Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 11:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win!
Delaney Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 9:29 PM
Beautiful poem, Harry Congratulations on your win, SuZ
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 7:05 PM
Harry congratulations on your marvelous win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Posey Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 3:00 PM
Great work, Harry. congrats on a well deserved win.... Jake
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 7:30 AM
how weird. I just sent you a soupmail that the comment boxes for this one were not showing. I came back just now and this time I am seeing the comments. I think it was a computer glitch!! oh and congrats again!
Andresen Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 2:01 AM
- A winning poem! .... Beautiful, Harry ! - Deserved really a good place on the winning list! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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June 5, 2013 at 12:49 AM
I love this one and it deserves a win, congratulations harry xx
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June 4, 2013 at 10:29 PM
Hello Harry.. I miss you.., :-) Congratulations with your beautiful poem. many different ways one can express the beauty of life. Thank you for everything. Goodnight * Linda
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December 18, 2012 at 11:15 AM
Awe yes,, reading this poem here once again. love the windgate description of you... always~PD
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 1:23 AM
ok, a NEW One for me on page 7!! Wow, it's the best of the ones I saw tonight. I love the descriptive pen you used with this, harry. this is you writing at your best!!
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 6:49 AM
Just stopping by to remind you of my newest contest The Birds And The Bees. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already Harry. Thank you if you have already entered or plan on entering. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 7:01 AM
btw looks like you won with this amazing piece, so congratulations are in order :)
K. Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 7:00 AM
What a very vivid piece, Harry! You definitely have talent, and I just really enjoyed this one! Keep on writing Harry! --nikko :)
Neels Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations on your win Harry :)
Culverhouse Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 3:58 PM
Thanks for your encouraging comments! and Congrats on the win!!
Fraser Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 7:16 AM
Many congratulations Harry on your win in Carol's fine contest with this wonderful poetry >> James
Johnson Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 6:49 PM
Verfy nicely drawnov, Joyce
Culverhouse Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 6:01 PM
enjoyed reading today!
Mehta Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 5:31 PM
Congrats on the win, harry
Freeman Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 5:05 PM
Congratulations,Harry on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 1:42 PM
Congrats Harry on your winning poem in Carol's contest with another terrific write and super win today my friend.. way to go .. enjoy another momentous victory with luv.
Brown Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Harry. Love, Carol
Knop Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 5:43 AM
So well written with great imagery, Harry, enjoyed very much the read this afternoon! Have a great day!.And thank you for all your kind comments!...Gert
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August 4, 2010 at 10:10 PM
thanks C.L will do with etch, i re wrote straight on to the site, instead of pasting. thanks for your kind comments. Harry
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