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Winded

I’m sitting on my lawn chair Outside the night is cool I hear the trees swaying The breeze chills my skin It knocks on my hippocampus Am I here or where it blows? Breeze, you are timeless From queens to divas, the same You carry me back to my childhood You go from high to my lows You leave me bereft as you leave You come at my like a windmill Alone I’m ash on your windy night It takes a Starry Night like tonight It takes a Van Gogh to go with you I would go mad like the wind I would chase that lonesome boy I would ride his Sirocco to him But I am too sane to be a zephyr Enough wind, it’s time to go in Make sure the windows are closed No wind, you can’t get to me No, you will not breeze through me The nostalgia you profess is shuddered The lonesome boy is here within I wish you would take him with you But, that would mean we are you When I’m dust we’ll both join you We’ll chase the highs to lows Come and visit me next time I’ll bundle up and be ready Just in case you carry me away I won’t repeat what Vincent did When he met you on a … Starry, starry night

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Date: 6/9/2024 7:58:00 PM
Dear Triny, your impassioned poem draws emotion up from a deep well of sad beauty. I adore this piece, so rich in sensory imagery, raw introspection, evocative language.. I was deeply touched by your verse, especially, "I wish you would take him with you/But, that would mean we are you/When I’m dust we’ll both join you/We’ll chase the highs to lows". Like the wind, your poem goes somewhere, straight to the heart and soul! A fav! A superb, haunting piece that lingers. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/27/2024 6:13:00 AM
'Am I here or where it blows?' - This is like going in the looking glass here, yet escaping without quite being caught. The lonesome boy, the wind, the dust all blow through the journey. I catch the sense of mystery and feeling whisked up in transience. J :)
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Triny Xiang
Date: 6/7/2024 5:24:00 PM
I don't know about you, but when the wind blows I feel too corporeal to be breezy. I feel Vincent ushering me on a draft but I have enough sense to write a poem instead.
Date: 5/26/2024 1:40:00 PM
This is a lively poem of many thoughts. Wind is many things. You caught my interest.
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Triny Xiang
Date: 6/7/2024 5:21:00 PM
Thank you. Yes, this piece goes here and there like the wind. The only difference is that mine goes nowhere.

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