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grandma pours me tea we talk late into the night moon covered by clouds paint peels from windows as grandpa rocks in his chair cigar smoke rises zephyr wind blowing shells and wood dance in the breeze I can hear music wind chimes tinkling on a sultry summer night childhood memories 8/28/18

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Date: 12/22/2018 7:11:00 PM
It was a joy to be captured by the beauty of your nostalgic poem. Such tender and moving emotions expressed wonderfully. Congratulations, Jan, on your excellent win. Warmest wishes for a joyous holiday season.. ~Susan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/22/2018 7:20:00 PM
Thanks Susan I only wish the memories had been for real:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/22/2018 4:15:00 PM
What a wonderful memory you have penned! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/22/2018 6:47:00 PM
I just wish it had been for real:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 12/22/2018 3:10:00 PM
A beautiful nostalgic gem. Congrats on your well deserved win, Jan.
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Date: 12/22/2018 6:46:00 PM
Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/22/2018 12:02:00 AM
Jan, congrats on your win on Mile 1 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. This haiku series was delightful to read and transported me to my childhood memories :)
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Date: 12/22/2018 12:40:00 AM
Thanks so much Mark:-) I am delighted to place in your first contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/25/2018 12:52:00 AM
Congratulations Jan, on your trophy win. I nearly missed this gem. Tom
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Date: 11/3/2018 5:49:00 PM
Thanks Tom sorry for the delay in replying I have so many comments outstanding!:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 9/23/2018 12:53:00 PM
Objects of your memories you cannot forget. Beautiful nostalgia poem, Ja
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Date: 11/3/2018 5:48:00 PM
Thanks Ralph, I just wish it had been based on real memories:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/18/2018 10:10:00 PM
nicely depicted the image of childhood
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Date: 9/21/2018 11:36:00 AM
Thanks Mahtab I just wsh it had been written from a real life experience:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/18/2018 5:34:00 PM
Hello Jan, it is a lovely childhood memory. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 9/21/2018 11:35:00 AM
I only wish it had been for real Darlene:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/18/2018 7:57:00 AM
Just like my baby powder memories, this conveyed a tender memory-soothing feel that holds great childhood caress appeal. Beautifully written, Jan. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 9/18/2018 3:00:00 PM
I wish it had been a true poem Caycay:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/8/2018 6:42:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Jan.
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Date: 9/8/2018 7:17:00 PM
Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/5/2018 3:39:00 PM
wonderful imagery, jan... congrats on your high win!...huggs
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Date: 9/6/2018 5:54:00 PM
Thanks Nette:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/2/2018 12:38:00 PM
Congrats on yours too! I can picture this, the scene, grandparents, tea, and the breeze bringing the tinkling sound of the chimes. Thank you Jan, for sharing and bringing my memories to mind.
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Date: 9/6/2018 5:54:00 PM
Glad you can relate for real, its pure fiction for me:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/2/2018 7:08:00 AM
Well deserved win Jan of happy memories.
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Date: 9/6/2018 5:53:00 PM
I only wish they had been true Jean:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/1/2018 1:20:00 PM
Lovely, lovely poem, Jan. I can hear those chimes as they are somehow in my memory too. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/6/2018 5:52:00 PM
Thanks Carole:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/31/2018 5:46:00 PM
I am so happy you got the trophy for this poem in Brian's contest Jan. It deserved a trophy win. Congratulations my friend! This is going into my faves! : )
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Date: 9/6/2018 5:51:00 PM
I'm really delighted thanks so much Connie:-):-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/31/2018 12:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jan
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Date: 9/6/2018 5:50:00 PM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/31/2018 10:47:00 AM
Lovely setting, great win, congratulations Jan...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/6/2018 5:50:00 PM
Cheers Charlie!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/30/2018 5:57:00 PM
Beautifully written, congratulations on your 1st place win!
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Date: 9/6/2018 5:50:00 PM
Thanks so much Tania:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/30/2018 4:01:00 PM
Top of the Pops in one of Brian's contests. Deservedly so as well, really good Haiku verses, regards Kevin xx
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Date: 9/6/2018 5:46:00 PM
Thanks Kevin:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/30/2018 3:05:00 PM
Yes yes yes! Knew this one was a belter! So glad Brian recognised it too! Awesome my friend!
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Date: 9/6/2018 5:46:00 PM
Thanks Nina, I rarely enter his contests so was shocked I got a trophy!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/30/2018 2:37:00 PM
- A wonderful winning poems, Jan ... Congratulations! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/5/2018 5:58:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne- Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/30/2018 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Jan with your beautifully written haiku. :))
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Date: 9/5/2018 5:58:00 PM
Thanks so much Roy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/30/2018 8:28:00 AM
Beautiful, Jan! Congratulations on this top win! ...Fran
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Date: 9/5/2018 5:57:00 PM
Thanks so much Francis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/30/2018 8:21:00 AM
Beautiful memories beautifully written, Jan. T.J
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Date: 9/5/2018 5:57:00 PM
Thanks so much TJ:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/30/2018 2:43:00 AM
Beautiful memories, Jan, congratulations on your win:)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/5/2018 5:56:00 PM
I wish it wasn't fiction Jo:-( hugs jan xx
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