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Wind Song

Weeping willows as scarecrows dance, tumbleweed runs like in a trance when windblown. A gentle breeze brings many joys; soon fear is wrought when it destroys, as windstorms raging war cries loud are spoken, stately trees are bent and broken from windblasts. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 11.21.2014 Contest: Fire, Earth, Wind Preferred word: Wind 6th

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Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/29/2014 12:45:00 AM

l like this too Brenda,congrats on the win...huggs

Faye Gibson

Date: 11/28/2014 11:41:00 AM

Beautiful, Brenda...I like your scarecrows. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2014 5:42:00 PM

Big congrats to you for your win. I liked how yours encompassed more than just imagery, but also a message against war.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/26/2014 7:50:00 PM

I love your first line, Brenda! Wonderful imagery!! Congrats on your win...hugs, Rhonda

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/26/2014 7:24:00 AM

breathtaking, powerful piece of art, Brenda...willows as scarecrows, my!.. thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats on your top win!

Earl Schumacker

Date: 11/25/2014 8:48:00 PM

Hi Brenda, You have a lot of interesting images going on in this poem. Nice job. Nice win. Congratulations. Take care. Earl

Joseph May

Date: 11/25/2014 7:55:00 PM

Congrats on your win Brenda

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/25/2014 6:05:00 PM

Hi Brenda, congratulations on your win in the contest! Loved your imagery and choice of words! Hugs, Sandra

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/25/2014 4:22:00 PM

You done good. I am sure I have never read anything you have written that I didn't love. You are so talented. Congratulations on your win.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/25/2014 4:08:00 PM

These wind poems are awesome..congrats..I especially like the last one. BG

Jan Allison

Date: 11/25/2014 2:45:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) hugs jan xxx

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/25/2014 8:33:00 AM

Amazing piece my friend. Flows like a clear mountain stream. Solid 7 and a pleasure to read this very fine morn..

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/27/2014 8:08:00 PM

Thanks so much Robert.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/25/2014 4:44:00 AM

love how this painted for me brenda excellent pen dear friend

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/25/2014 7:23:00 AM

Thanks Liam.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/25/2014 4:39:00 AM

outstanding Brenda I love the winds (most of them) you took me with you gl in contest hugs

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/25/2014 7:22:00 AM

Thank you Shadow.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2014 6:29:00 PM

WELL DONE, Brenda. I don't know how she is going to decide best winners in this one. They are all so marvelous!! Love yours.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/24/2014 9:39:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/24/2014 3:36:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..I like the form used..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/24/2014 9:39:00 PM

Thank you Sara.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/24/2014 8:36:00 AM

A beautiful poem, some amazing images.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/24/2014 2:50:00 PM

Thank you Maurice.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/23/2014 9:21:00 PM

This is great Brenda I Loved your use of words to create your visual effect it's a very powerful write, nice ending well pulled together for the whole part of your poem here, cheri good luck in the contest my friend I think you have a great chance with this one my sister poet, cheri

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/24/2014 2:49:00 PM

Thanks Cheri

Paul Callus

Date: 11/22/2014 2:46:00 PM

You did very well with this compound word contest, Brenda. Like Jan you broke it up into three separate parts. I struggled more, trying to have one whole structure for the same subject. I love your 1st stanza best. #7 // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/22/2014 4:15:00 PM

Thanks Paul. I started at the bottom line and ended up moving upwards instead of down.

Sandip Goswami

Date: 11/22/2014 1:39:00 PM

Great unique thoughts...Thank you very much...Best to you...

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/22/2014 2:30:00 PM

Thank you Sandip

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/22/2014 12:46:00 AM

Superb write Brenda! Trust it's a winning wind for u! Gl in contest!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/22/2014 8:05:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Sharma.

David Meade

Date: 11/21/2014 10:11:00 PM

May the wind blow you to victory!! nice job friend.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/21/2014 10:57:00 PM

Thanks David

Jan Allison

Date: 11/21/2014 6:56:00 PM

Beautifully penned Brenda I've written for the contest but think i need to amend it - mine too is wind but very different to yours:-) Hugs jan xx I've been busy posting and writing today lol:-)

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/21/2014 7:40:00 PM

Thank you Jan

Eve Roper

Date: 11/21/2014 6:43:00 PM

Nice write, Brenda, good luck on the contest :) blessings eve

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/21/2014 7:38:00 PM

Thanks Eve