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Wind Song

Weeping willows as scarecrows dance,
                                    tumbleweed runs like in a trance
                                               when windblown.

                                   A gentle breeze brings many joys;
                                soon fear is wrought when it destroys,
                                                 as windstorms

                                    raging war cries loud are spoken,
                                    stately trees are bent and broken 
                                                from windblasts.

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
11.21.2014
Contest: Fire, Earth, Wind
Preferred word: Wind
6th

Copyright © Brenda Meier-Hans | Year Posted 2014

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Kayod5 Kayode Date: 11/29/2014 12:45:00 AM l like this too Brenda,congrats on the win...huggs Login to Reply

Faye Gibson Date: 11/28/2014 11:41:00 AM Beautiful, Brenda...I like your scarecrows. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/27/2014 5:42:00 PM Big congrats to you for your win. I liked how yours encompassed more than just imagery, but also a message against war. Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/26/2014 7:50:00 PM I love your first line, Brenda! Wonderful imagery!! Congrats on your win...hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/26/2014 7:24:00 AM breathtaking, powerful piece of art, Brenda...willows as scarecrows, my!.. thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats on your top win! Login to Reply

Earl Schumacker Date: 11/25/2014 8:48:00 PM Hi Brenda, You have a lot of interesting images going on in this poem. Nice job. Nice win. Congratulations. Take care. Earl Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 11/25/2014 7:55:00 PM Congrats on your win Brenda Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 11/25/2014 6:05:00 PM Hi Brenda, congratulations on your win in the contest! Loved your imagery and choice of words! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/25/2014 4:22:00 PM You done good. I am sure I have never read anything you have written that I didn't love. You are so talented. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 11/25/2014 4:08:00 PM These wind poems are awesome..congrats..I especially like the last one. BG Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/25/2014 2:45:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) hugs jan xxx Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 11/25/2014 8:33:00 AM Amazing piece my friend. Flows like a clear mountain stream. Solid 7 and a pleasure to read this very fine morn.. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/27/2014 8:08:00 PM Thanks so much Robert.

Liam Mcdaid Date: 11/25/2014 4:44:00 AM love how this painted for me brenda excellent pen dear friend Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/25/2014 7:23:00 AM Thanks Liam.

Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/25/2014 4:39:00 AM outstanding Brenda I love the winds (most of them) you took me with you gl in contest hugs Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/25/2014 7:22:00 AM Thank you Shadow.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/24/2014 6:29:00 PM WELL DONE, Brenda. I don't know how she is going to decide best winners in this one. They are all so marvelous!! Love yours. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 9:39:00 PM Thank you so much Andrea.

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/24/2014 3:36:00 PM Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..I like the form used..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 9:39:00 PM Thank you Sara.

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/24/2014 8:36:00 AM A beautiful poem, some amazing images. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 2:50:00 PM Thank you Maurice.

Cherl Dunn Date: 11/23/2014 9:21:00 PM This is great Brenda I Loved your use of words to create your visual effect it's a very powerful write, nice ending well pulled together for the whole part of your poem here, cheri good luck in the contest my friend I think you have a great chance with this one my sister poet, cheri Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 2:49:00 PM Thanks Cheri

Paul Callus Date: 11/22/2014 2:46:00 PM You did very well with this compound word contest, Brenda. Like Jan you broke it up into three separate parts. I struggled more, trying to have one whole structure for the same subject. I love your 1st stanza best. #7 // paul Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/22/2014 4:15:00 PM Thanks Paul. I started at the bottom line and ended up moving upwards instead of down.

Sandip Goswami Date: 11/22/2014 1:39:00 PM Great unique thoughts...Thank you very much...Best to you... Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/22/2014 2:30:00 PM Thank you Sandip

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/22/2014 12:46:00 AM Superb write Brenda! Trust it's a winning wind for u! Gl in contest! Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/22/2014 8:05:00 AM Thank you Dr. Sharma.

David Meade Date: 11/21/2014 10:11:00 PM May the wind blow you to victory!! nice job friend. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/21/2014 10:57:00 PM Thanks David

Jan Allison Date: 11/21/2014 6:56:00 PM Beautifully penned Brenda I've written for the contest but think i need to amend it - mine too is wind but very different to yours:-) Hugs jan xx I've been busy posting and writing today lol:-) Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/21/2014 7:40:00 PM Thank you Jan

Eve Roper Date: 11/21/2014 6:43:00 PM Nice write, Brenda, good luck on the contest :) blessings eve Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/21/2014 7:38:00 PM Thanks Eve