Wind Song

Wind Song
      by Amy Swanson  2008


Melodious breath
     Wind's gentle song sings softly
           Lullaby of life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 8:29 AM
Amy - Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Christie’s contest – God Bless, MJ
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January 6, 2009 at 3:14 PM
Congraulations with your Honorable Mention...Raul
Winter Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 11:45 AM
Congratulations Amy on your win in Christie and Nigel's contest! Absolutely beautiful and so well deserved! Love, Shar
Gass Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 10:21 AM
Congratulations, Amy, for your well deserved win. This is a wonderful write. You said so much with just a few words! Excellent form! Love, Robin
Richards Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 8:31 AM
Beautiful and sweet! Congratulations, Amy, on being in the winners circle! ~Love, Carrie
Reynolds Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 7:36 AM
beautiful, and congrats! Kristin
Moreno Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 7:59 PM
Like always lovely form, great work Amy. I like haiku's and this one is excellent...Raul
Payne Avatar
December 8, 2008 at 12:22 PM
This is so elegant. It seems to sing just like the wind. Beautiful write I love your haiku's :) well and the rest of your poems lol. I'm glad you like my stuff :) Awesome write, again Love, ~Michaela~
Heck Avatar
December 8, 2008 at 10:34 AM
A beautiful and inviting haiku! I loved the softness and gentle quality of each line. Wishing you and your loved ones a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. Peace always, John
Thomas Avatar
December 8, 2008 at 9:34 AM
Beautiful haiku! Love all the alliteration, and the phrase "melodious breath" is especially wonderful. ~Juliane
Gorelick Avatar
December 8, 2008 at 9:05 AM
Good one..lots of alliteration that makes it so smooth. BG
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