Wind Song

Wind Song by Amy Swanson 2008 Melodious breath Wind's gentle song sings softly Lullaby of life.

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Michael Jordan

Date: 1/22/2009 8:29:00 AM

Amy - Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Christie’s contest – God Bless, MJ

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/6/2009 3:14:00 PM

Congraulations with your Honorable Mention...Raul

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/6/2009 11:45:00 AM

Congratulations Amy on your win in Christie and Nigel's contest! Absolutely beautiful and so well deserved! Love, Shar

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/6/2009 10:21:00 AM

Congratulations, Amy, for your well deserved win. This is a wonderful write. You said so much with just a few words! Excellent form! Love, Robin

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/6/2009 8:31:00 AM

Beautiful and sweet! Congratulations, Amy, on being in the winners circle! ~Love, Carrie

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/6/2009 7:36:00 AM

beautiful, and congrats! Kristin

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/22/2008 7:59:00 PM

Like always lovely form, great work Amy. I like haiku's and this one is excellent...Raul

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/8/2008 12:22:00 PM

This is so elegant. It seems to sing just like the wind. Beautiful write I love your haiku's :) well and the rest of your poems lol. I'm glad you like my stuff :) Awesome write, again Love, ~Michaela~

John Heck

Date: 12/8/2008 10:34:00 AM

A beautiful and inviting haiku! I loved the softness and gentle quality of each line. Wishing you and your loved ones a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/8/2008 9:34:00 AM

Beautiful haiku! Love all the alliteration, and the phrase "melodious breath" is especially wonderful. ~Juliane

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/8/2008 9:05:00 AM

Good one..lots of alliteration that makes it so smooth. BG