Wind Shill Swiper


Gave Mr. Bro’ man a couple of dollars,
with a frown gave he a backhand holla
Said my alms were light,
and my palms were tight
Man, how I hate ingrate red stop collars!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Callus Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 12:32 PM
I doubt if I have ever read a Limerick of yours, Freddie, but I can assure you that it has been truly enjoyed, my friend....still smiling:) ~ Happy Thanksgiving to you and all yours. // paul
Borke Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 9:39 AM
This is witty.
Macfarlane Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 9:01 AM
Hahaha, great limerick Freddie. Hugs
Chiri Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 3:21 AM
Haha love it Freddie!;)
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 6:56 PM
nicely done and smooth flowing, Freddie!
Babbit Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 9:42 AM
Uncanny, well done.
Na Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 9:25 AM
Great Limerick Freddie. Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving
Y. Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 7:00 AM
Lol! Freddie, I really enjoyed your limerick. It was done in your own unique style as well. Well done my friend. I would like to see another. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
One Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 6:43 AM
hahahah... never seen you write a limerick.. you even did this in your own style!! commendable!
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