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wind shifts
a leaf pauses
midair
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Dietrich Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 10:28 PM
That's so lovely Congratulations.
Agustin Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 12:50 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
Fowler Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 2:17 PM
Lovely haiku Kahlani. Congratulations! :)
Rodgers Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 1:12 PM
Hello Kahlani, Congrats on POTD! That feeling of a single moment stretching out, and the stillness in between everything... you've really captured something special. Blessings, Kahlani, Daniel
George Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 6:48 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD honor,Kahlani.
Nicole Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 7:45 PM
Simple, yet very expressive. Your thoughts describe the season and scene, perfectly. Congratulations Kahlani, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 12:49 PM
Hello Kahlani :-) Lovely haiku! Congratulations with your win and p.o.t.d. Have a nice day ~ AA
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 10:09 AM
Love this! Well done! Congrats on POTD!
Freie Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 9:36 AM
A flying fig leaf from frisky winds. Oops, guess I should have shaved my Fig Newton! How embarrassing! Red-faced Randy regrets regrettable revelation! But, congrats are in order for your POTD! A frisky wind wafts your way from well deserved accolades!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 8:35 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your "wind shifts" Haiku write. Have a blessed day writing away.................
Meadows Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 6:37 AM
Congratulations on your POTD.Well done!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 5:54 AM
Captivating, wonderful haiku! Congratulations on POTD honours. xomo
Messina Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 4:38 AM
Great imagery, Kahlani. Congratulations on POTD!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 3:46 AM
liked the brevity and succinctness...congrats of your POTD designation.
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September 22, 2025 at 2:50 AM
Lovely Kahlani, congratulations on receiving poem of the day… Beryl
Andresen Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 1:40 AM
- Congratulations with your win and p.o.t.d. ... hooray :) -
Crandall Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 6:49 PM
Cool image!
George Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 10:15 PM
I can visualize the leaf suspended in midair. Lovely Haiku. Hearty Congratulations Kahlani on your trophy win.
Mohn Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 5:26 PM
great haiku :)
Steele Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 7:48 PM
Thank you so much, David.
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 8:52 AM
Love this. Congratulations
Steele Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 4:19 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. I appreciate your lovely words.
Sharma Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 7:04 AM
Beautiful amalgamation of the two different aspects (movement and pause) in this haiku. Best wishes.
Steele Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 4:20 PM
Thank you very much for your wonderful feedback.
Derden Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 5:40 AM
Nicely done. Congratulations.
Steele Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 4:20 PM
Thank you, Danny. I appreciate that.
Miller Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 3:36 AM
Beautiful haiku, congratulations
Steele Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 4:21 PM
Thank you very much, Terry, for your kind words.
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