Wind in My Lungs

I taste the wind deep in my chest
each breath sharp with sky and grit.
Dawn pushes heavy against my shoulders
every step thunders beneath me.

Hills rise, silent and stubborn...
creeping memories I cannot shake.
My hands throb, my legs burn.
A silent spark beats beneath my ribs.

Every footfall sends a spark.
Each pulse beats with stubborn will.
They rush past - brushing my arm
their courage carried by the wind.

The last stretch hums beneath my bones, a rhythm only the determined feel.
I’m tired, but I keep going.
The ache is there but I carry on.

The finish isn’t the line I cross,
it’s the strength I hold beyond it.
it’s the strength I carry past it.
Every step brings a small victory.
Every breath keeps its own strength.
A life built one stride at a time...
foot by foot, wind at my back.
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 3:49 PM
I appreciate and can relate to the 'running' metaphor, for I was a runner for 20+ years. I especially liked these lines: Every step brings a small victory. Every breath keeps its own strength. A life built one stride at a time... foot by foot, wind at my back. Such depth in this poem. Marvelous!
Velasco Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 4:08 PM
Thank you so much for sharing that with me. Wow—20+ years of running is such an inspiring journey! I’m glad those lines resonated with you, as they came from a place of both endurance and hope. Your kind words mean a lot.
Hind Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 11:18 PM
Deep...you seem to have crossed over it, Rowena!! I also feel my voice in the wind. Beautiful.
Velasco Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 12:34 AM
Thank you so much! I love that you feel your own voice in the wind too—there’s something magical about words carrying pieces of all of us.
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