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Wind Blown Dreams

The wind howls, breaking branches all about with cracks Roaring like a racing train down the long metal tracks. The wind blows lightly gliding a paper boat floating by So quickly noticed, then gone with the blink of an eye. The wind whistles in the grass, blowing the drifting sand At a beach with waves crashing white wild curls onto land One after another… The wind upon my face, releases tension into the air around Where kites are flying above the park with a flapping sound. At the end of the day… - It stops - A calm evening settles quiet, as the silence tells a story, to be. It began with the wind tossing images all around to see. From the water to land, from the sky to the sea, it seems Pictures ease the mind to sleep, falling into wind-blown dreams. Heidi Sands 3/30/17

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Date: 4/29/2017 3:35:00 PM
Very nice write Heidi. I feel like I'm sitting the dunes of Lake Michigan among the tall grass reeds. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/29/2017 3:37:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind comment Pete. I am glad it brought you to a place in your mind :)
Date: 4/1/2017 12:38:00 PM
This is such a beautiful poem, Heidi. The flowing imagery is poetic transcendence. A jewel that I will place among my fave. Splendid poem. Love and peace to you.
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Date: 4/1/2017 12:39:00 PM
Thanks so much Freddie. I appreciate your feedback and support always :)
Date: 4/1/2017 12:09:00 PM
Very well thought out and written poem!
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Date: 4/1/2017 12:14:00 PM
Thank you so much Mike ! :)
Date: 3/31/2017 10:22:00 PM
This is so descriptive, and it's done in such a pleasant sounding and flowing poem. I sense freedom, and a splash of bravado when I read this ...your words have a life energy that moves me. Emile.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/1/2017 7:38:00 AM
Hi Emile. Thank you for such a kind comment. I appreciate your feedback and I am so happy my poetry moves you, because that is the most I can ask for with writing. :)
Date: 3/31/2017 2:32:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Heidi - Mild temperatures and some delicious wind gets dreams and thoughts to fly :) - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/31/2017 6:01:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Have a nice weekend :)
Date: 3/31/2017 9:52:00 AM
I like the different stages of the wind Heidi...well crafted
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Date: 3/31/2017 5:59:00 PM
Thank you , Tim :)
Date: 3/31/2017 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations Heidi you have written another gem. I love the way you describe the many phases of the wind and how it can be relaxing when you feel it on your face. I really nice poem Heidi well written and well done.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/31/2017 5:59:00 PM
Thank you Edward :)
Date: 3/31/2017 8:55:00 AM
So very nice my friend. This poem was comforting and peaceful feeling. Thank you sharing these moments of your day with us in such a beautiful form.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/31/2017 8:59:00 AM
Hi Chris. I am happy to hear you found this to be comforting and peaceful. I appreciate your visit and kind words. Thank you.

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