Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Wind Blown Dreams

The wind howls, breaking branches all about with cracks
Roaring like a racing train down the long metal tracks.
The wind blows lightly gliding a paper boat floating by
So quickly noticed, then gone with the blink of an eye.
The wind whistles in the grass, blowing the drifting sand
At a beach with waves crashing white wild curls onto land
                                
                                One after another…

The wind upon my face, releases tension into the air around
Where kites are flying above the park with a flapping sound.
                                 
                               At the end of the day…                       
                                  
                                     -  It stops  -

A calm evening settles quiet, as the silence tells a story, to be.
It began with the wind tossing images all around to see.
From the water to land, from the sky to the sea, it seems
Pictures ease the mind to sleep, falling into wind-blown dreams.

Heidi Sands
3/30/17

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Pete Yuhas April 29, 2017 at 3:35 PM Very nice write Heidi. I feel like I'm sitting the dunes of Lake Michigan among the tall grass reeds. Thanks for sharing. Heidi Sands April 29, 2017 at 3:37 PM Thank you for your visit and kind comment Pete. I am glad it brought you to a place in your mind :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. April 1, 2017 at 12:38 PM This is such a beautiful poem, Heidi. The flowing imagery is poetic transcendence. A jewel that I will place among my fave. Splendid poem. Love and peace to you. Heidi Sands April 1, 2017 at 12:39 PM Thanks so much Freddie. I appreciate your feedback and support always :)

Mike Hauser April 1, 2017 at 12:09 PM Very well thought out and written poem! Heidi Sands April 1, 2017 at 12:14 PM Thank you so much Mike ! :)

Emile Pinet March 31, 2017 at 10:22 PM This is so descriptive, and it's done in such a pleasant sounding and flowing poem. I sense freedom, and a splash of bravado when I read this ...your words have a life energy that moves me. Emile. Heidi Sands April 1, 2017 at 7:38 AM Hi Emile. Thank you for such a kind comment. I appreciate your feedback and I am so happy my poetry moves you, because that is the most I can ask for with writing. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 31, 2017 at 2:32 PM - A wonderful poem, Heidi - Mild temperatures and some delicious wind gets dreams and thoughts to fly :) - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands March 31, 2017 at 6:01 PM Thank you Anne-Lise. Have a nice weekend :)

Tim Smith March 31, 2017 at 9:52 AM I like the different stages of the wind Heidi...well crafted Heidi Sands March 31, 2017 at 5:59 PM Thank you , Tim :)

Edward Mccall March 31, 2017 at 9:42 AM Congratulations Heidi you have written another gem. I love the way you describe the many phases of the wind and how it can be relaxing when you feel it on your face. I really nice poem Heidi well written and well done. Heidi Sands March 31, 2017 at 5:59 PM Thank you Edward :)

Chris Green March 31, 2017 at 8:55 AM So very nice my friend. This poem was comforting and peaceful feeling. Thank you sharing these moments of your day with us in such a beautiful form. Heidi Sands March 31, 2017 at 8:59 AM Hi Chris. I am happy to hear you found this to be comforting and peaceful. I appreciate your visit and kind words. Thank you.