Wind-Up Doll

Here I am a wind-up doll Now almost run down Wondering why I was so wound up Something in the world ~ I'd found

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Michael Tor

Date: 8/14/2022 12:29:00 PM

Love how you associated the wind up doll with being run down and it is from her worldly experiences that are taking its tow on people. Clever my friend as always...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2022 6:11:00 PM

Do'in' my best, Michael. Trying to wind myself up a bit again! Cheers, Gershon

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 8/13/2022 9:37:00 PM

Old Age and unfortunately I have lost the key.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2022 9:39:00 PM

Now, Shirley. I humbly ask you to stop writing such things about my poet friend, Shirley Hawkins. Please! Pretty Please! With a cherry on top! ~ In Friendship and Appreciation, Gershon