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Written: November 03, 2023 ________________________________________ Ambrosia-colored slants shine and gaze within. With delight, watch the white embers spin. Sifting through waves of serenity and quiet. That rustling across the heavens is reliant. In this outpouring of glorious radiance, I believe we all require authentic shadiness. A place where the soul may rest in peace. We pray every night; carnage must cease. This unchanging mood is shared by nature. Greeting everything with eager prayer Holding every bit of grass, heating each stone. With a dazzling embrace and a beaming tone. The velocity of the world ceased to blur. Whispers of eager voices rustle and spur Drafts of leading vitality reach the soul. The era we are in currently is rich and full. Dreams drift in the air akin to wisps of wind. The depths of inner reach are being blind. Silent cries blend with an aesthetic melody. As rising goals meet broad esoteric parody.

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Date: 11/4/2023 5:59:00 AM
You have a very deep and philosophical way of thinking, and that is evident through your word weavings too! I really love also the way you paint imagery and flow of descriptive diction and rhymes! So good! As always! Impressive! I especially love the lines “ Whispers of eager voices rustle and spur“ and “ Dreams drift in the air akin to wisps of wind.“ your wordplay is so stunning! And flow is seamless! And depth of every line truly touches the readers soul! Absolutely loved reading your work
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Date: 11/3/2023 6:54:00 PM
This is beautiful Lasaad. Loved it. You Never Fail To Impress Me. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/3/2023 2:45:00 PM
- We all need a place to rest our souls in this troubled world... and let dreams float in the air like breaths of wind, Las - An excellent poem - (sorry, but haven't had time to read much this week ) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 11/3/2023 2:20:00 PM
dearest Sotto--I listened to your poem before reading it. Listening to it being read gave life and meaning to your words. I'm grateful you include those recordings. Your rhyme scheme flowed like a classical piece of music. The range of emotions was powerful...something about this poem appealed to me--can't quite put my finger on why...it was more than the words themselves. The contrast between words like 'authentic shadiness' were masterful. You have such creative, artistic talent. Awed! Sara
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