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I am done, finished, I am going now, It is getting a bit sore, hurting now! I come here poets, simply to make more friends, write Poetry, with life to make amends! Poetry is expression of my thoughts, come in abundance, somedays do not, I wish to share them with you in this place, please do not make this some kind of rat race! So do you win more often than I do? Poet of the day, contests , what have you! If it pleases so much, you can have mine! I shall continue to write, just be fine! Each poem comes with its own fingerprint, same thoughts but said from different precincts, In them see a reflection of my mind, when they write better, I shall stay behind! so when you win next, give yourself a pat, I shall stay behind and raise you my hat, True happiness lies not in being best, but having the heart to applaud the rest! I shall love you and leave you with a bow, For token prizes let’s not have a row!!
Written 24/04/2021 Judge not lest ye be poetry contest John Lawless sponsored Sonnet 10 syllables each line 5x4+2

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Date: 5/15/2021 11:25:00 PM
The two last lines of the fifth stanza, speaks volume about you, dear one. May you win. Thanks for sharing
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/15/2021 11:33:00 PM
Thanks dear Iris! Yes, there is greater happiness when we relish the wins of others rather than spend our lives obsessed with our own little achievements! This poem breaks the rules of the sonnet but I could not change it. so left it unaltered! Thanks for your kind words and wish!!:)
Date: 4/27/2021 7:35:00 PM
Beautifully written with so much grace. Your lines are thick with craft and fascination. Great work.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/28/2021 7:19:00 AM
Thanks Funom. Breaks the 14 line sonnet rule. It may not qualify for the contest.
Date: 4/26/2021 10:23:00 PM
PS: sonnet has 14 lines.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/26/2021 10:57:00 PM
You are right. Thanks. But this one is longer and a longer modification is okay. The rule doesn’t specify and contests have allowed me to win with a longer sonnet. I am not too keen to modify to score a win! perhaps more important to be read. Thanks for your thumbs up.
Date: 4/26/2021 7:46:00 AM
Superb! Well said! Well done! Hope you are enjoying your retirement. Take care, Rama
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/26/2021 10:14:00 AM
Thank you Rama. Yes, a bit more relaxed!

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