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Willy

There's a monster beneath my bed At least that’s what brother said Mom said-" now that’s just silly You know your brother Willy, He just tries to make you shiver" "But Wlly said it 'd eat my liver !" You know I couldn’t go to sleep In case the monster made a peep And sure enough, round midnight The monster gave me a terrible fright The thing let out an awful roar And pounded on the bedroom floor Then the monster began to giggle And my whole bed began to jiggle You guessed it, out popped Willy The smack I gave him was a dilly,,, We're grown now, its been awhile But silly Willy still makes me smile..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/22/2014 5:01:00 AM
Reminds my conscience to be guilty... otherwise, a splendid poem!!!
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Date: 10/19/2014 7:45:00 PM
You can do such fun rhymes with a name like Willy. Do you remember the old song: Little little Willy won't go home. (I can't think of it all now. It was a cute song) I really like this poem!
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Date: 10/15/2014 12:45:00 PM
Lovely write with flowing rhyme, Barbara; made me smile too! Congrats on a fine win! // paul
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Date: 10/14/2014 9:51:00 PM
I love this Barbara. With four siblings I can relate so well to this. It's going to my Fav. list. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/14/2014 9:37:00 PM
Lovely humor flows in the write, Barb, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/14/2014 8:41:00 PM
Love this Barbara...I had a brother who hid under my bed and gave it the "Exorcist" shake about 10 min after I got in...I'm still recovering :) Congrats
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Date: 10/14/2014 5:58:00 PM
Big congrats on your win BG
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Date: 10/14/2014 5:33:00 PM
Lovely and wonderful piece...Congrats on your superb win in this contest...
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Date: 10/14/2014 11:58:00 AM
ha ha ha love the humour here many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/14/2014 10:19:00 AM
A well crafted poem,Congrat Barbara
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Date: 10/13/2014 1:08:00 PM
Haha...a fun piece....hugs Tim
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Date: 10/13/2014 10:36:00 AM
having grown up with 5 brothers this hit close to home..
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Date: 10/13/2014 8:22:00 AM
Love to you and Willy. Really, those were the days. So much entertainment and laughter for your golden childhood. THANKS.
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