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Willows Weep For Me- Cm

willows weep, for they know my pain; each branch, a worn tissue- silent dawn awakes ‘fore the tree, and my mind lost at dusk willows weep, for they feel my ache; clamored mind hushed from love, swaying ‘tween soft muted whispers… knowing not they should fear I chose: 2. “There, within, inside my head, the tree speaks” – The Tree Within howmanysyllables.com CHOOSE AN OCTAVIO PAZ LINE Poetry Contest Sponsor: Nette Onclaud August 25, 2019

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/31/2019 10:51:00 PM

laura, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2019 5:04:00 PM

this is gorgeous, LuLoo. What a well deserved win!!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/30/2019 1:46:00 PM

A worthy winner - truly beautiful. Poetry hugs ...CayCay

Brenda Chiri

Date: 8/30/2019 8:22:00 AM

And another wow! I'm inspired my dear luloo! Your art with poetry is truly astonishing!;) I'm gonna have to come read you a bit more often! Now if I can pry my way off here I want to continue reading!;)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/30/2019 7:16:00 AM

A feeling of pensive sadness runs through your words, Lu Loo. The weeping willow speaks in your name. Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/30/2019 12:10:00 AM

this held me in awe from start to end, lu... melancholic images so beautifully expressed... thanks for joining my contest and huge congrats on your trophy win!...huggs

Chris Green

Date: 8/29/2019 1:16:00 PM

Wow, and I thought I stood a chance in this contest. That was amazing in it's sadness and it's beauty. Such a soft but lonely feeling poem.. Best of luck.

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/26/2019 7:01:00 AM

this is beautiful even in its sadness... penned perfection my friend, good luck in the contest :) hugs