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Willows Alliteration

The wicked witch wandered west
where weeping willows whisper wearily
in the winsome wind
wishing wistfully and waiting
while wondering why
wild wisteria wither
or whether the weather will wane
and  who would wave the  willowy  wand

 5-27-2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/9/2013 4:54:00 PM
cONGRATS Joseph~A.O
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Date: 4/6/2013 6:03:00 PM
Wonderful piece,Nice presentation,May....Congrats on your well deserved win....
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Date: 4/5/2013 8:05:00 PM
Joseph, CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome alliteration- poem. Had fun reading all entries. take care~LINDA
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Date: 4/4/2013 8:04:00 PM
Revisiting this one after I posted my own willow poem. Great alliteration this was!
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Date: 5/28/2012 12:05:00 PM
I wow this wonder wittily with words I won't waste. A tricky rhyme done to perfection! :)
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Date: 5/27/2012 10:40:00 PM
Wicked witch from beginning to end!! One of my fav poetic effects is alliteration, Joe. Nice flowing sounds...Hey, my eyes aren't the best at night..is that the Star Ship Enterprise on your avatar?...haha. Love it if it is! Gwendolen
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Joseph May
Date: 5/28/2012 6:49:00 AM
Thank you Gwen..no its not the Enterprise..but it's a futuristic spaceship
Date: 5/27/2012 5:40:00 PM
Great W alliteration. I enjoyed this!! W moves so softly on the tongue!
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Joseph May
Date: 5/28/2012 6:47:00 AM
thank you Andrea
Date: 5/27/2012 12:37:00 PM
a good write, enjoyed this one Joseph,..p.d.:)
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Joseph May
Date: 5/28/2012 6:46:00 AM
thank you PD

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