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Willows Alliteration

The wicked witch wandered west where weeping willows whisper wearily in the winsome wind wishing wistfully and waiting while wondering why wild wisteria wither or whether the weather will wane and who would wave the willowy wand 5-27-2012

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/9/2013 4:54:00 PM

cONGRATS Joseph~A.O

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 4/6/2013 6:03:00 PM

Wonderful piece,Nice presentation,May....Congrats on your well deserved win....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2013 8:05:00 PM

Joseph, CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome alliteration- poem. Had fun reading all entries. take care~LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2013 8:04:00 PM

Revisiting this one after I posted my own willow poem. Great alliteration this was!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/28/2012 12:05:00 PM

I wow this wonder wittily with words I won't waste. A tricky rhyme done to perfection! :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/27/2012 10:40:00 PM

Wicked witch from beginning to end!! One of my fav poetic effects is alliteration, Joe. Nice flowing sounds...Hey, my eyes aren't the best at night..is that the Star Ship Enterprise on your avatar?...haha. Love it if it is! Gwendolen

Joseph May
Date: 5/28/2012 6:49:00 AM

Thank you Gwen..no its not the Enterprise..but it's a futuristic spaceship

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2012 5:40:00 PM

Great W alliteration. I enjoyed this!! W moves so softly on the tongue!

Joseph May
Date: 5/28/2012 6:47:00 AM

thank you Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2012 12:37:00 PM

a good write, enjoyed this one Joseph,..p.d.:)

Joseph May
Date: 5/28/2012 6:46:00 AM

thank you PD