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Willow Tree

High upon that willow tree
That's where I wanna be

We just go together like that
Just you and me

Way up in that willow tree
I met you on that sunny day
When the clouds were far far away

I love it when you touch me that way
How you run your fingers through my hair

Love is so crazy good with you 
And I really want to keep it that way

Copyright © Debbie Duncan | Year Posted 2011

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Duke Beaufort Date: 4/22/2017 6:09:00 PM Willow trees have a shape like falling hair. The tree and your hair have something in common in the verses in a funny way. It's as though someone gets into your head--in a very pleasant way. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/4/2013 8:06:00 PM Revisiting this one I liked so much in the past. I also just did a willow poem so that's why I was attracted again by this title when searching for an oldie of yours to read! Login to Reply Debbie Duncan Date: 4/4/2013 9:41:00 PM ;}

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/15/2013 12:01:00 AM I really like this one. It is so sweet and yes, haiku are very hard to write, which is why you rarely see me doing one. haha. Don't worry. Very few people "get" haiku!!! I think it's a rare expert who can write one good enough to be in a journal of haiku. Login to Reply Debbie Duncan Date: 1/15/2013 6:32:00 AM Thank you Andrea ;}

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 7/12/2012 7:16:00 PM Nicely rhymed and expressed! Simple words with a romantic message! Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply Debbie Duncan Date: 7/12/2012 10:19:00 PM Thank you Keith ;}

Don Johnson Date: 6/14/2011 10:29:00 PM Tender love up above the willow tree:) may it remain ! 4 ye comment thanks soundly banked :) Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 6/9/2011 10:38:00 AM this was a beautiful written piece of creative poetry. i will put this in my favorites, love the flow of it, so refreshing and easy to read, and to understand what you your saying. thank you for comemting on Free Will. Login to Reply