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Willow Tree

High upon that willow tree That's where I wanna be We just go together like that Just you and me Way up in that willow tree I met you on that sunny day When the clouds were far far away I love it when you touch me that way How you run your fingers through my hair Love is so crazy good with you And I really want to keep it that way

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/22/2017 6:09:00 PM

Willow trees have a shape like falling hair. The tree and your hair have something in common in the verses in a funny way. It's as though someone gets into your head--in a very pleasant way.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2013 8:06:00 PM

Revisiting this one I liked so much in the past. I also just did a willow poem so that's why I was attracted again by this title when searching for an oldie of yours to read!

Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/4/2013 9:41:00 PM

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2013 12:01:00 AM

I really like this one. It is so sweet and yes, haiku are very hard to write, which is why you rarely see me doing one. haha. Don't worry. Very few people "get" haiku!!! I think it's a rare expert who can write one good enough to be in a journal of haiku.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 1/15/2013 6:32:00 AM

Thank you Andrea ;}

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/12/2012 7:16:00 PM

Nicely rhymed and expressed! Simple words with a romantic message! Best wishes, Keith

Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/12/2012 10:19:00 PM

Thank you Keith ;}

Don Johnson

Date: 6/14/2011 10:29:00 PM

Tender love up above the willow tree:) may it remain ! 4 ye comment thanks soundly banked :)

James Foulk

Date: 6/9/2011 10:38:00 AM

this was a beautiful written piece of creative poetry. i will put this in my favorites, love the flow of it, so refreshing and easy to read, and to understand what you your saying. thank you for comemting on Free Will.