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The willow has tiny green leaves showing this morn..Sara

willow  skeletal
long cold winter drains sap down...
tiny green leaves show

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James Fraser

Date: 2/25/2012 4:27:00 PM

Skeletal we all are, and life in us will sap. It's what we do in between, for this we must not lack. Words are what writers have, they are our building blocks. The Soup is where we roam, just like a shepherds flock. <*> Have a most lovely Sunday Sara :) xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/19/2012 1:22:00 AM

Wonderful imagination of tiny green leaves presented with haiku. Thanks always, bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/18/2012 10:01:00 PM

nice imagery Sara and good luck in contest too.. can hardly wait for Spring and Summer to really appear here luv..

Kevin Clark

Date: 2/18/2012 5:18:00 PM

Lovely haiku.

Don Johnson

Date: 2/18/2012 5:17:00 PM

too hot here 4 this probby mate, ole summer burns and steam gyrates...

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/18/2012 4:04:00 PM

A coming of spring, the willow outside my window as i write this, is still very bare. like this Sara, harry

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 2/18/2012 2:57:00 PM

Dear Sara, What you say is so true. However, we have to depend upon Christ to give us the ability to remain surrendered. We can't do anything in our own power and that's why we are such dependent children - needing the Father! God bless you! Love, Maureen

Jack Horne

Date: 2/17/2012 2:45:00 PM

Lovely haiku, my friend

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/17/2012 11:20:00 AM

now this is the genuine 'ku, sara.. love the last line.. my winning bet!..:) huggs and happy friday! :)

Kash Poet

Date: 2/17/2012 11:13:00 AM

An excellent haiku and very keen observation by you Sara.Enjoyed the read.

Erich Goller

Date: 2/17/2012 11:03:00 AM

It seem spring is trying to push winter out. Very nice Haiku .Thanks for sharing it.God bless you, Hugs!Erich

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2012 10:47:00 AM

IF this is for the tree contest, I heartily approve!!! Hope you are enjoying your day. Luv, Andrea

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/17/2012 10:42:00 AM

What a wonderful write on a winters condition! I love willow trees even in the winter, beautiful pieces of nature! You wrote an amazing piece! Great Work!!