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Willow

Loose green tendrils drooping low kiss the soft green earth, the bough kneels with the wind as if in prayer, a penitent, so humble, so predictable, like others of its kind. A pliant bow that's unreleased, and like to spring to heaven with a swish, a stately, monumental king of meadow and a murmuring stream, in haze concealed, a misty dream, a graceful monolith 'twould seem, cloaked in the blue-grey hush.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/27/2012 6:10:00 PM
I always felt willows were a romantic tree and this poem proves they are. Great minds must think alike! :)
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Date: 5/31/2012 2:00:00 PM
This is fabulous Keith, the enjambment is perfect and your skill for crafting imagery is unparalleled... loved it! Annie x
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Date: 5/22/2012 2:13:00 PM
Please enter this in my personification contest ;) Light & Love
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Date: 5/22/2012 2:03:00 PM
You had me smiling for it you ever encounter those willows they have quite a back lash. Been hit a few times by them. Enjoyed the visual description. love phyl
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