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Will You Walk It With Me

Will you walk it with me? I wake up and again my first thought is you, a smile appears on my face The morning sun is shining through my window as I imagine what the day will bring I get ready for work as a poem floats around inside of my head and I can’t wait to write it I grab my keys and wallet thinking, “What you are doing right now, is it me you are missing?” I walk outside the front door, seeing a beautiful dawn waiting, and breathe in the fresh air Realizing, I am taking another step on the pathway to forever, and I wonder “Will you walk it with me?” Good morning Soupers

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/22/2017 5:07:00 PM

Hi Chris!:)Very beautifully written romantic, sweet and passionate love poem Chris!:)Very enchanting! Just beautiful!I truly love it all the way! A 7 + + ! A fav too. For sure I'll be back n' continue reading more of your very beautiful poems, my friend Chris:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:)) D

Chris Green
Date: 6/22/2017 6:03:00 PM

Thank you again my friend. I always appreciate the kindness you leave for me on my poetry.

Lenna Walker

Date: 6/6/2017 12:33:00 PM

Sure Chris ! Having a friend by your side can be a true blessing on the path of life, especially when you are missing a certain someone .... us humans aren't meant to walk alone although some still have to. Deep thought provoking write Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 12:39:00 PM

And I can think of no better friend to walk with me. Thank you so very much Lenna. And you are right. many still do walk alone, it is sad but hopefully someday they will look down and see two shadows instead of just one.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/6/2017 9:50:00 AM

Oh yes, how can I not? Beautiful poem, Chris, and a very good morning!

Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 9:54:00 AM

A very good morning to you too Jo. I'd love to have you walk with me my friend. Thank you for all of the kindness you always show to me.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/6/2017 9:29:00 AM

And...Thank you for giving us such beautiful poetry to look forward to :)

Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 9:41:00 AM

Thanks again my friend, you are so welcome.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/6/2017 9:28:00 AM

Awesome poem this is! What an ending welcoming a walk on a pathway to forever! Love it :)

Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 9:40:00 AM

Thank you Heidi for always being there (or here). You seem to make me smile each time you visit.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/6/2017 8:24:00 AM

Chris, I like the phrase " I am taking another step on the pathway to forever"

Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 9:40:00 AM

Thank you so much Eve.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/6/2017 8:18:00 AM

Good Morning Chris, Yes, I will walk with you. How could I not? In all seriousness this is a beautiful and well written write. The build up until the end was well worth the wait. I anticipate your writes because I know I will be viewing something amazing. Excellent job:-)Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 9:40:00 AM

Good morning Alexis. Come on then, let's go. :) Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you enjoy my work.

Darren White

Date: 6/6/2017 8:15:00 AM

Always... Good morning Chris :) And yes, it is a deep poem and I like the question you put. And the answer is: always.

Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 9:39:00 AM

Good morning my friend. Thanks so very much.

John Lawless

Date: 6/6/2017 7:57:00 AM

...so many subtle inferences to play with in this wonderful invitation to walk with you.....Love the last tercet.....

Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 9:39:00 AM

Thanks so very much John

White Wolf

Date: 6/6/2017 6:57:00 AM

Oh, I like this one a lot, Chris! You are the master of finishers! And good morning by the way!

Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 9:38:00 AM

Good morning Rick. Thanks so much my friend.