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Will You Slumber On

When the moon retires its gleam, And sunlight shines upon the dew, Do you rise from bed anew? Or slumber on in a waking dream…. All rights released into Public Domain

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Date: 10/12/2016 10:01:00 AM
Nicely done Brian! Congratulations! ...Fran
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Brian Chung
Date: 10/12/2016 10:46:00 AM
Thank you francis, please drop by my new blog: https://purelandsutras.wordpress.com/blog/
Date: 8/25/2016 5:04:00 PM
Pleasing...I think it is rather good - Nicely penned, Brian! A seven. My best regards! :) john
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Brian Chung
Date: 8/25/2016 9:53:00 PM
Thank you very much, John!
Date: 8/25/2016 9:47:00 AM
Well written ... was pleased to read ...
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Brian Chung
Date: 8/25/2016 10:44:00 AM
Thanks, Probir!

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