Will You Slumber On

When the moon retires its gleam,
And sunlight shines upon the dew,
Do you rise from bed anew?
Or slumber on in a waking dream….




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October 12, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Nicely done Brian! Congratulations! ...Fran
Chung Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 10:46 AM
Thank you francis, please drop by my new blog: https://purelandsutras.wordpress.com/blog/
Fleming Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 5:04 PM
Pleasing...I think it is rather good - Nicely penned, Brian! A seven. My best regards! :) john
Chung Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 9:53 PM
Thank you very much, John!
Gupta Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Well written ... was pleased to read ...
Chung Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Thanks, Probir!
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