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Will You Lie Down

She has made your bed
Satin word sheets and pillows
Will you now lie down?

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2013 10:43:00 AM

this is an awesome confirmation to what Richard's poem says about you. I just read his superb homage for you. That was a treat!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/15/2013 11:19:00 AM

Eileen; no man in his right mind would refuse. Thanks for sharing..... lucilla

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2013 11:25:00 PM

Yes, my dear....I guess not! :) Then this lady is lucky! How are you, my dear? Hope all is well. HUGS!

Richard D Seal

Date: 8/15/2013 10:18:00 AM

This sounds normal, woman makes plans and expects man to comply, the question sounds familiar too lol. Take care, Richard

Richard D Seal
Date: 8/16/2013 6:34:00 AM

Send me a copy, it sounds interesting reading lol

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2013 11:26:00 PM

Yes... a man's job is to hunt, bring in the food, protect, provide, nurture, cherish, satisfy, AND comply to her every wish!!! Didn't anybody give you the manual, Mr Seal???? Take care.....

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/15/2013 7:43:00 AM

As Richard said "Beautiful in it's simplicity" Couldn't have said it better my sweet friend! Big warm hugs coming your way Teach xoxox

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2013 11:27:00 PM

XOXOXOXOXOXOXO Right back at ya, Kenny! Hope you are having a good night in dream land and will wake up to a great day where you will write a couple more funny ones to keep us smiling!

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/15/2013 7:39:00 AM

May one lie in the bed they made...deep senryu.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2013 11:32:00 PM

Hi Drake! Yes, we make our beds and then we have to lie in them!!! If the bed is made for the right person, then whatever happens there is SWEET...including the dreams which come later! There are many ways to seduce...for poets and poetesses...words are the all time driving force and one must be careful! We are prone to be taken in by the beauty of the words and are wooed, sometimes to the wrong bed! Hope all is well with you, my dear!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/15/2013 6:48:00 AM

Beautiful in it's simplicity, have a great day Eileen.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2013 11:33:00 PM

Thank you, Richard. Beautiful is an adjective that I love! Have a great restful night. See you in the morning!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/15/2013 5:32:00 AM

This is a glorious write my friend! I love the satin word sheets and covers, so very clever! I truly loved reading this wonderful poem this morning! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2013 11:34:00 PM

Thanks, Russell! Glad to have you stop by again! Hope all is well. Clever, eh? I'm glad then. All the best.