Will you cry if I die

Will you cry if I die?
die I must, more inevitable than I was born.

Born in night, I did cry,
cry, that was the sound of joy.

Joy of birth then, now the joy of death,
death will bring a closure to the miseries of life.

Life spent in survival, always striving to pay the bills,
Bills from now will be someone else's headache.

Headache I get reflecting on my past life,
life was full of thrill and agonizing moments.

Moments of love and affection I cherished,
cherished not, the death is lurking by my side.

Side by side, my love, we spent our life,
life with ambitions and lust has come to a close.

Close by you, when I die, you smile with tearful eyes,
eyes that I will adore, saying goodbye with heart full of love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Baker Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 3:37 PM
To close to home for comfortable reading, my friend. Well done to form. Good luck if this is a contest poem. Have a pleasant weekend! Bill
George Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 2:22 AM
Agree with what Anne has commented below. However sad life be, saying goodbye is always painful. This is a difficult form where one has to start each line with the ending word of the previous line. But you have done it with so much ease.
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 10:58 AM
- Even with the certainty that death is inevitable, it is sad to say goodbye Jay - hugs
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