Will You Carry Me

Will you carry me, as I have you, Whether skies are grey or blue. As time goes by and I grow older, I fear my death will have no shoulder, for me to lay and rest my head, before I reach my final bed. A last request, I don't ask much, but please, give me one last touch, just one last token of your love, before I'm sent to God above. Hold me proudly next to your ear, and listen close, perhaps you'll hear, me whisper 'thank you', sincerely. I only ask you'll carry me.
18th August 2011
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Brown Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 11:53 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Inspiration" contest Jodie. Love, Carol
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August 7, 2012 at 9:18 AM
Heartfelt poetry !! A wonderful sensitive write that this reader enjoyed. Congrats on your win !!
Williams Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 12:55 PM
Jodie congrats on your win, love it...David
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August 5, 2012 at 12:42 PM
Jodie, this is just such a touching and powerful poem. It shows such depth. Well done, I really so enjoy your poems. Lee
Taylor Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 11:46 AM
Congrats, Jodie. Excellent. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph
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August 4, 2012 at 8:12 PM
JODIE. ;-) Congratulations with the inspirational words you offer through your poem...Thanks once again for supporting my contest.... LUV~ PD
Brown Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 8:53 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Brian's sponsored contest Jodie. Love, Carol
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October 11, 2011 at 3:59 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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October 10, 2011 at 11:18 PM
Congrats Jodie, there was a time in my life I wondered if everyone would be too busy or would there be someone for my last moments, the touch, the smile, the warmth of another soul.
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October 9, 2011 at 5:57 PM
Congrats Jodie on another dynamic win for outstanding poetry luv..enjoy...
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October 9, 2011 at 2:23 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win with this heart warming poem!!!!-----Lori
Smith Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 9:23 AM
I'd carry you, baby; only I ain't going there. Love your poem, though.
Bagnall Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 7:59 AM
Beautiful, very affecting. Good luck in the contest.
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