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Will Weep With You

the tree looks forlorn branches curved down to the ground ... I will weep with you Non traditional Haiku

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James Fraser

Date: 1/15/2013 1:30:00 PM

The image is so easily captured by your words :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/15/2013 2:49:00 PM

Thank you James

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/5/2012 2:37:00 PM

Seren,, good haiku...pd

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/15/2013 2:49:00 PM

Just noticed this comment my apologies Thanks PD...seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/4/2012 9:00:00 AM

Hi there, see you have got what it takes don't forget your ellipsis xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/4/2012 12:56:00 PM

what mustnt i forget Mandy, you swearing at me......Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/3/2012 3:05:00 PM

i'm so glad i'm the first here, this is brilliant, your juxtapose line is perfection...

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/3/2012 3:22:00 PM

lol you swearing at me juxtapose whats that Harry????? will soup mail you... seren