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Will of the Wind

       Will of the Wind        going where she feels        dances to her inclination        humming joyfully                            August 18, 2020               11:30am PST Poets notes. In error, I listed it as a halibun, originally Of course it is a haiku)))))) I do not use the halibun, form ever. My error. Vision problem. Apologies PR Original Title was....,"Wind Dancer"

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Date: 8/19/2020 8:18:00 AM
Hi Pangie, a Haiku that sings into the mind. I could feel the wind within your words. I love the Haiku form. A fav. Have a wonderful Thursday. Blessings and Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/19/2020 9:09:00 AM
Yes,,,the magic of the wind, eh! So glad you are so expressive in comments. Wow.i almost dashed this one~maybe good I did not,it morphed into a FAV,)) In appreciation, Pangiexx
Date: 8/19/2020 1:09:00 AM
A haiku that conjures up a scene of happiness. Tom
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Date: 8/19/2020 6:57:00 AM
Yes, an accurate Description! Pangie WEDNEDAY 7Am pst
Date: 8/18/2020 6:42:00 PM
Just beautiful verse Write on! James
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Date: 8/18/2020 7:40:00 PM
Hello James, may goodness and happiness be yours. Thank you for the kind words. Pangie xx
Date: 8/18/2020 4:49:00 PM
This is super-sweet as a haiku, Panagiota! --though the wind in California right now has a little too much free will, methinks. Whew! Hot! :) gw
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Date: 8/18/2020 5:17:00 PM
Freedom in California, NO such animal. But plenty of hot air. Oy! Besides our governor drowned CA in debt. He imagines himself as Nero. Needs a lock ward, If the sun rises, that weenie of a man, takes credit. Almost nothing is open here, he just needs to wear a Swastika. A mensch he is not, nor HaShem. Funny how each Poet sees what they choose in each poem. Thank you. Pangie xx
Date: 8/18/2020 2:24:00 PM
Oh, I love this. Very nice ! :)
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Date: 8/18/2020 2:31:00 PM
Hi There, Miss Heidi, Trust you are doing well. We are sweltering in a heat wave here but doing good despite that. I am so pleased, very pleased you liked this obe. Thank you! Pangie xx
Date: 8/18/2020 12:56:00 PM
Ah, to relive those days! Thank you for conjuring up some lovely memories.
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Date: 8/18/2020 1:52:00 PM
Sharon, I did not delete this as I said I would. See my notes, please do at the bottom of the poem. Actually, this poem conjured up similar memories for me. I miss dancing terribly, Sharon. It's one of the most freeing experiences for me. I love Brazilian music the most..Bossa Nova.. Sexy yet romantic! Thank you for Commenting Sorry for the confusion. Panagiota

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