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Will Keep On Looking At Thee

If you hide behind the stars I will watch you through the mirror, moon And if you hide in memories and the heart's scars I will watch you through memories transparent balloon If you hide in the breeze when its scarce I will watch you through the pool and expect you soon Or if you stay blurry in the white snow I will watch you and let my brain process slow If you hide in a barrel and let yourself sail i will watch you through the transparent water, I won't let my sight fail If you become great and make a no see decree I will hide and watch you on trees No matter how you keep yourself from me I will stay and watch, I won't let the emotions flee

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/29/2016 12:39:00 PM

Hi White Sage, Well this is another excellent write. This Sonnet sings for me. Your journey to see the beloved comes through strongly my friend. The journey of our words does paint our canvas with such beauty. Your canvas i shall come back to look at. I am not sure but i think this is the first Sonnet i have read from you my friend so i fave it. I like the vision your words do paint so it gets a seven my friend....Vladislav.

White Sage
Date: 1/29/2016 3:20:00 PM

thanks so much Vladislav, am glad you made a comment on this, I've written some sonnets, STILL LOVE YOU MORE THAN AS BEFORE, ANNYPIE and this piece are all sonnets...I appreciate your comment dear friend