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Will Amuse With Proper Shoes

we may have the blues should stop then we will amuse choose the proper shoes read news page by page when my bright mind may engage could see cat in cage constant covenant good looks appeared prevalent where ever she went there had been much trash we could see in Calabash things may cost much and cash saw pretty Persian scattered in a dispersion while on an excursion had been escorted became badly distorted will be deported

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Date: 2/13/2023 6:48:00 PM
permanently never knew was POTD came all over me How do I find out what this has been all about might be Brussel sprout
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Date: 2/13/2023 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
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James Horn
Date: 3/1/2023 6:13:00 PM
Thanks. Now I have to figure out how to answer all of the comments. This is my first POTD in a long time.
Date: 2/12/2023 2:56:00 AM
superb and beautiful haiku; congrats for POTD
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:12:00 PM
Thanks. Now I have to figure out how to answer all of the comments. This is my first POTD in a long time.
Date: 2/10/2023 11:07:00 PM
Congratulations James...
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:13:00 PM
Thanks. Now I have to figure out how to answer all of the comments. This is my first POTD in a long time.
Date: 2/10/2023 7:38:00 PM
James, congratulations on your POTD. Wonderful!
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:15:00 PM
Thanks. Now I have to figure out how to answer all of the comments. This is my first POTD in a long time.
Date: 2/10/2023 5:23:00 PM
"Will Amuse with Proper Shoes." Yes, you have. The one in your haiku, did too. This is so cute and clever. Your thoughts bring a smile. Congratulations James, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:14:00 PM
Thanks. Now I have to figure out how to answer all of the comments. This is my first POTD in a long time.
Date: 2/10/2023 4:31:00 PM
An amusing string of Haiku James, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:15:00 PM
Thanks. Now I have to figure out how to answer all of the comments. This is my first POTD in a long time.
Date: 2/10/2023 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations James on POTD. You have an intriguing use of combining rhyme and repetition in your haiku story. interesting shoe tale.
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:16:00 PM
Thanks. Now I have to figure out how to answer all of the comments. This is my first POTD in a long time.
Date: 2/10/2023 3:42:00 PM
James, congratulations on POTD, a creative collection!
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:16:00 PM
Thanks. Now I have to figure out how to answer all of the comments. This is my first POTD in a long time.
Date: 2/10/2023 10:47:00 AM
James, congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:17:00 PM
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Date: 2/10/2023 10:21:00 AM
James - a clever haiku/ based on shoes unexpected ~/ blue suede or wingtips? Congrats - Ken
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:17:00 PM
Thanks. Now I have to figure out how to answer all of the comments. This is my first POTD in a long time.
Date: 2/10/2023 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD. Enjoy :)
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:18:00 PM
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Date: 2/10/2023 7:43:00 AM
Quite the selection of Haikus, James. Well done! Congratulations on your POTD honor! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:18:00 PM
Thanks. Now I have to figure out how to answer all of the comments. This is my first POTD in a long time.
Date: 2/10/2023 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win...................
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:18:00 PM
Thanks. Now I have to figure out how to answer all of the comments. This is my first POTD in a long time.
Date: 2/10/2023 4:32:00 AM
James, congratulations on your POTD honors!!!
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:19:00 PM
Thanks. Now I have to figure out how to answer all of the comments. This is my first POTD in a long time.
Date: 2/10/2023 1:31:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., James -
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:19:00 PM
Thanks. Now I have to figure out how to answer all of the comments. This is my first POTD in a long time.
Date: 2/10/2023 12:52:00 AM
Congratulations James on POTD….Debx
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:20:00 PM
Thanks. Now I have to figure out how to answer all of the comments. This is my first POTD in a long time.
Date: 2/10/2023 12:37:00 AM
Well written. Congratulations on your POTD, James !
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:20:00 PM
Thanks. Now I have to figure out how to answer all of the comments. This is my first POTD in a long time.

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