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Monoklitteration Poetry Contest / Nette Onclaude / 5-30-2025

Wildflower


in wonderment she waltzed to womanhood - 
                                                         wildflower whirlwind 
                                                                               met world
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Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 9:47 AM
- Beautiful written, CayCay ... congratulations :) - hugs
Anaya Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 8:41 AM
Back with more positive words, congratulations!
Woods Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 8:33 AM
Way to go! What a wonderful writing with wholesome whimsy! Winner! Woo!! With witty words, C. Woods (13 Ws!!!...uhem, WoW!) ;) (15)heehee
Onclaud Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 8:02 AM
the ripeness of womanhood so well spun...congrats on your top win and thanks for being part of my contest, cay!
Winter Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 7:31 PM
Dear CayCay, what a lovely and whimsical monoku! The imagery of a "wildflower whirlwind" perfectly captures the carefree and vibrant spirit of youth as it blossoms into womanhood. The alliteration adds a playful touch, making it a delightful read. Beautiful!Best, Anne
Hind Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 7:36 PM
Absolutely breathtaking- yours has got to be at least close to first! Best one I have read. :)
Man Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 8:59 AM
Very Lovely!! So much said in so few words.. a master!
Godwin Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 6:53 PM
So glad am I that you visited. Thankful am I for that and your lovely comments. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Anaya Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 8:16 AM
You surely have a way with w words! Best alliteration and concept for contest~
Godwin Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 6:52 PM
Hey, there and thank you for your positive words in my comment box ... CayCay
Buhagiar Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 1:51 AM
Loved this one. Keep your balance when waltzing. Tim will help you :)
Godwin Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 5:15 AM
Thank you, Dahling. Too late to help me, I done long ago arrived, for better or worse, I did arrive!!!! Kidding with you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 1:01 AM
Yours is one of my favorites for wildflower
Godwin Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 6:51 PM
Thank you, Sweetheart ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 1:00 AM
Great job. Everyone is doing wildflower with similar words. It's fun seeing how we all put the coolest w words together.
Godwin Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 5:13 AM
Uh oh, last thing I want to be, one of the last things, is redundant (common.) Good to see you here. Love ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 5:01 PM
Love this, CayCay!
Godwin Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 5:12 AM
Thank you, Kim. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 4:35 PM
she certainly has blossomed in your poem CayCay! hugs Jan xx
Godwin Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 4:46 PM
Thank you, Sweetness. Love .. CayCay
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