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Thou art a very wicked one, I tell you this, your life's undone, For evil doth run through your veins, You must be mad or quite insane. Though your poison is a tasty drop, I sometimes wish I could drink the lot, Your hair aflame, your eyes on fire, But you're so low, you take me higher. Only I know of your wicked ways, And you don't care who seems to pay, But life is meaningless without you, So I shall claim now what I'm due. When I turn around and see you there, I don't seem to worry, or have a care, You play with me like a toy, But I'm so happy you bring me joy. And when you're done, you'll toss me aside, Until that day I shall not hide, For life without you, I cannot lie, Is not worth living, I may as well die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/12/2018 6:24:00 PM
Damn conundrum, but such is the way of people... kinda makes me hungry.
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Date: 10/9/2018 7:30:00 AM
I liked it , nice one Rick ;)
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Date: 9/28/2018 3:44:00 PM
Taking the bad with the good in a relationship and still loving. Right on!
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Date: 9/20/2018 4:54:00 AM
Good Morning White Wolf. All I can say is this is exquisite. Just that opening line and two words alone of "thou art". Yes, you are a poet. May this day find you well.
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Date: 9/12/2018 7:40:00 AM
Love with chains. Excellent write! You are on the top of your game!
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Date: 9/10/2018 5:56:00 PM
I like what someone down here said. What's a lover to do? I loved the contrast here : knowing the evil but still wanting it at any cost!
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Date: 9/2/2018 10:45:00 AM
I love the concluding lines. Those are great exhibiting real LOVE.
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Date: 8/25/2018 3:22:00 PM
Sometimes wicked people are magnetic! But what's a lover to do? Loved it.
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Date: 8/19/2018 8:31:00 PM
I love every single word in this poem, and the way it comes together as a tribute to the wild woman who is a lone wolf, you cannot live without, even though you suspect her sanity.
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Date: 8/18/2018 11:37:00 PM
Loved this white wolf, I hope you dont mind one small complaint to the management, shouldn't the photo be of the woman and not the wolf? :) Cheers!
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Date: 8/18/2018 11:37:00 PM
Or is that a censor issue?
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Date: 8/18/2018 6:38:00 PM
Shes a keeper
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Date: 8/18/2018 5:57:00 PM
insightful psychological...nice write : )
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