Wild Winds

will he be
lost to the wild winds
or just
to me

by Gail

absenceadventurelosslovemountainsrhyme

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Gail Foster

November 17, 2015 at 7:17 AM

Thank you for that, Lin. I did wonder if it should be longer, but decided in the end that this was all that needed to be said. Best wishes to you x

Lin Lane

November 17, 2015 at 7:13 AM

Sometimes the cliché 'less is more,' is the best way to go...In the case of your rhyme, it definitely is.

John Fleming

November 15, 2015 at 2:15 PM

An intriguing little muse, Gail. Cleverly conceived and nicely expressed. My best regards! :) john

Gail Foster

November 17, 2015 at 3:52 AM

Thank you for your lovely comment, John. My poems are usually longer but this expresses much in few words. Maybe I will write a poem with the answer one day. All the best to you.

Eileen Manassian

November 15, 2015 at 11:03 AM

What an intriguing question, Gail. One's left to wonder about the sentiments behind the lines. Thanks ever so much for your gracious comment on my poem. Blessings.

Gail Foster

November 17, 2015 at 3:58 AM

Thank you so much, Eileen. It's a long story to tell in twelve words. So many things are a mystery, and the greatest mystery of all is love. All good things to you x

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