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Wild Waves - Haikuette

roaring of tubular waves curling lip of white froth sea's power

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Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 4:53:00 PM

amazing imagery

Joseph May

Date: 6/12/2013 6:08:00 AM

congrats on your win Connie

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/15/2013 7:31:00 PM

Joseph thank you for the congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/11/2013 6:56:00 PM

Folks often do this with a haiku, make 3 separate thoughts, in 3 lines, I hope you have now shown them it is called a haikuette LOL YOU did it RIGHT! Congrad's on your win. Light & love

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/15/2013 7:38:00 PM

Debbie thank you for the congrats and the lovely comment. it means a lot. I was not sure if I had done this Haikuette correctly. Warm Smiles, Connie

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/11/2013 6:47:00 PM

YOur "curling lip" is terrific. congrats to you. BG

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/15/2013 7:29:00 PM

Thank you Barb for the congratulatory comment. much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/11/2013 5:03:00 PM

wow...I love the description "curling lip of white froth" !!! That line is perfect !! Congratulations, Connie!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/11/2013 6:28:00 PM

Thank you Carrie for your congratulatory comment. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2013 10:42:00 PM

oh boy, that wannabe contest. Dang,I have not even studied it out yet. I sure hope you got it right coz it looks pretty cool.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2013 5:37:00 PM

hmm, what means Haikuette? Is it supposed to be different from haiku? Anyway, this is a good description of those kinds of waves, Connie!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/4/2013 12:56:00 PM

A Haikuette is a 3 line poem. Each line must be a separate entity,yet contribute to the whole-17 syllables or less (no specific number of syllables per line). No verbs, unrhymed an use a title. This is the meaning conveyed in the 'Wannabe' contest. I'm not sure if my poem is correct. Warm Smiles, Connie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/3/2013 2:19:00 PM

a standout all the way... enjoyed the natural appeal of this 'ku..:) hugggs

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/3/2013 2:38:00 PM

Thank you for your great comment Nette. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/3/2013 3:59:00 AM

The description using so few words lets me feel the power of the ocean..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/3/2013 2:01:00 PM

Sara thank you for the great comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/2/2013 5:19:00 PM

This Haikuette will do awesomely well for Debbie's contest! I believe she will really enjoy this as much as I did! I loved reading this illustrious poem this evening! What a remarkable piece, such a grand poem here Connie! Great Work!!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/3/2013 2:02:00 PM

Russell thank you for the great comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie